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Write an Elevator Pitch for Your Blog [Day 1 -31DBBB]

Elevator WomanWelcome to Day #1 of the 31 Days to Build a Better Blog Challenge. As on each day of this project today I’d like to present you with two things:

  1. Some Teaching/Theory
  2. A Task to go away and Do

Teaching

Today’s task (outlined in full below) is to develop an Elevator Pitch for your Blog. Let me explain why.

What is an Elevator Pitch?

“An elevator pitch is an overview of an idea for a product, service, or project. The name reflects the fact that an elevator pitch can be delivered in the time span of an elevator ride (for example, thirty seconds or 100-150 words).”Wikipedia

Many business and self improvement type courses teach students to develop an elevator pitch for their business (and even for themselves). The idea is to have something short and sharp that you can say about yourself when the opportunity arises instead of bumbling your way through explaining what you or your business does (and miss an opportunity).

The goal is both to communicate what you do and to get the person you’re communicating it to to want to know more.

Elevator Pitches for Bloggers

While the idea of an elevator pitch is usually something that start up entrepreneurs are encouraged to do when looking for investors – developing an elevator pitch for your blog is also a smart move also.

One of the most important reasons to do this exercise is that to develop an elevator pitch YOU as a blogger to have thought through and crystallised in your mind what your blog is about.

If you’re fuzzy on what your blog is about it’s unlikely than anyone else will have much of an idea either.

Knowing what your blog is about helps you in developing every aspect of it including:

  • Writing Content
  • Promotion and Finding Readers
  • Search Engine Optimisation
  • Networking with other Bloggers
  • Branding
  • Design…. the list can go on.

In fact almost every task that we’ll be doing in this next 31 days should flow from this task.

Other Reasons for Developing an Elevator Pitch

Of course coming up with an elevator pitch is not just for your own benefit. Once you’ve got one it is brilliant for communicating what your blog is about to readers (both the ones you already have and potential ones), other bloggers, potential partners, media/journalists, advertisers and even to friends and family members who might not get what you’re doing.

Once you’ve got your blogs elevator pitch there’s no limit to the places and situations that you can use it (either part of it or in its entirety). Here are a few that come to mind:

  • Your blogs tag line – having a short, sharp and descriptive ‘tag line’ for your blog can be a powerful technique for quickly communicating to new readers to your blog what it is all about. Readers who don’t get a sense for what your blog is about are in danger of leaving quickly – so a tagline that is displayed prominently on your blog can be a great way to hook them in.
  • Your about page – the about page of a blog (if you have one) is one of the most read pages of a blog by first time visitors. It is an ideal place to communicate what you’re about and to ‘sell’ to potential readers why they should subscribe and come back.
  • Real Life Conversation – whether it be at a conference, in business interactions or just in everyday conversation, the topic of your blog is likely to come up from time to time and these interactions can be an ideal moment to pull out the elevator pitch to describe what your blog is about.
  • Business Cards – I get a lot of business cards given to me at conferences and to be honest at the end of the day I can’t remember who gave me most of them. Adding an elevator pitch to a card can help trigger who you are and what you do in the mind of those you chat with at these busy types of events.
  • Pitching to Media – One of the things I’ve noticed about many journalists is that they’re very busy people who are constantly being pitched with ideas for stories. Having a thought through and effective ‘pitch’ can help you get noticed and give a journalist a reason to listen to what you’ve got to say.
  • Pitching to Other Bloggers – Similarly, I find that if I’m being ‘pitched’ to as a blogger that I take more notice if the person pitching to me gives me a brief insight into who they are and what they do.
  • Email Signature – many people have links to their blogs in their emails, but a link can be somewhat meaningless on its own. Why not add your elevator pitch? Similarly signatures in forums can be a good place to have a short description of what you do to motivate people to check you out further.
  • Social Media Profiles – the same thing goes for all those social media profiles that you have. Why not use them to not only point people to your blog but to give them a reason to go there!

Where else would you use an elevator pitch? I’m sure there are so many more times to pull them out! Feel free to share other places you’ll be using yours.

Your Task for Today

Take some time out today to develop an elevator pitch for your blog. If you’ve already got one take a few minutes to review and refine it.

How to Write an Elevator Pitch for Your Blog

I’m sure there has been much written on the topic online but here’s some starting points that I use when doing this type of thing.

  • Solve a Problem or Need – I’m a big believer in developing blogs that fulfil real needs and solve problems that people have. The problem need not be a big one (like World Peace) but you should be attempting to create something that people need on some level. Communicate this in your elevator pitch.
  • Define Your Audience – who is your blog for? Who are you attempting to attract? IF your blog is targeting a certain demographic or type of person (and it may or may not) – include this in your pitch. If your blog is for teens, don’t develop a pitch for grandparents – target the reader you want.
  • Be Clear – don’t leave people second guessing what you mean or interpreting jargon – make your elevator pitch crystal clear.
  • Keep it Short – People have limited attention spans and capacity to absorb lots of information. Get to the point, eliminate unnecessary words and make it punchy!
  • Stand Out – be willing to use humour or powerful imagery to grab the attention of those that hear your elevator pitch.
  • Be Intriguing – your elevator pitch is unlikely to ‘convert’ people to read your blog all on its own – but it should entice them to learn more. You don’t need to say everything in it – but attempt to write something that is still in the mind of those who hear it long afterwards.
  • Be Energetic but not Hyped – you convey more than just dry information when describing your blog – but you also convey what YOU feel about it. This is important – if you ‘pitch’ someone with language and a voice that is dry and uninspired you’re unlikely to convert anyone into a reader. Show people that you love what you’re doing, that you’re passionate and that you care about your topic. But don’t go too far and hype it up beyond what it is!
  • Consider Using a Question – people are wired to answer and engage with questions. Ask them, even just rhetorical ones, in your pitch and you’ll hook people in.
  • Be Ready to Expand Upon Your Pitch – at a recent conference I had someone come up and give me what seemed like an elevator pitch about their blog. It worked really well, they got me interested – so interested that I asked them to tell me more. The problem was that they didn’t really have much else to say about their blog. See an elevator pitch as a conversation opener – something designed to lead into further interaction with people. You don’t have to say it all in your initial pitch – but you should be ready to say more if people are interested.

These are just the thoughts that come to my mind on elevator pitches (what would you add?). Not everyone will be able to incorporate all of the above points but I hope that some of it will help you to develop yours.

My Elevator Pitch
I have a couple of elevator pitches my blog here at ProBlogger. One’s short (just 6 words) and one’s a little longer (a minute or so). I use one or the other of them depending upon the circumstances and opportunity to share.

My short one is very simple – ‘ProBlogger helps Bloggers Build Exceptional Blogs’. I’ve used others over the life of this blog (and continue to evolve it) but have settled on this one for the time being because it is so simple, to the point and clear.

The longer version expands upon this and shares some of the ways that the blog helps bloggers improve their blogs by talking through a few of the main topics I cover.

Write Your Elevator Pitch

Once you’ve got an elevator pitch for your blog write or print it out and put it somewhere near your computer so that as you blog you can be reminded of it. You might also like to start to incorporate it into your blog as a tagline or in your about page – or even to write a post about it on your blog to communicate to your readers what you’re on about (the appropriateness of writing it as a post will of course vary from blog to blog).

Once you’ve done that – feel free to share what you’ve come up with in comments below. I’m looking forward to reading yours.

Tomorrow on the 31 Days to Build a Better Blog Challenge – tomorrows task is a writing task that will have you writing a particular type of blog post to use on your blog in the next few days.

Sign up for 31DBBB

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Update! Get feedback on your results, and see what others are doing over at the forum: Day 1 – Create an Elevator Pitch for Your Blog

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About Darren Rowse
Darren Rowse is the founder and editor of ProBlogger Blog Tips and Digital Photography School. Learn more about him here and connect with him on Twitter, Facebook and LinkedIn.
Comments
  1. Good directive post. I had no elevator pitch on the blog but on the website, now I’m off to connect the two with the goal of creating a pitch and a cohesive message.

  2. Great post! Love it that the project is starting. Here is my Elevator Pitch:

    Pixelking.org is a Photoshop-focussed design-blog developing people from artistic rookies to creational spookies!

    Hope you like it :-)

  3. Here’s the elevator pitch for FirmFamilyTree.com.

    I provide my readers with information designed to help them grow their ability to develop significant and strategic relationships with an eye towards generational impact.

    Short version — Grow – Develop – Impact

    Awesome series!
    Marvin

  4. good thoughts. I’m wondering where to put this pitch? Top of the blog? Headline? or just use this generally?

  5. Way to go Darren. I had been waiting for the post to arrive and here I am reading to my heart’s content. And I do agree with your version of Elevator Pitch and there is no benchmark which can assure that what a person has chosen would reflect the entireity of a blog or site of theirs.

    I have personally thought about this way back and had come up with a short tag line for my blog. And after reading this post, I felt assured that I had been right and my lines would really suit my blog’s content.

    As I write on simplifying the technical applications and softwares and help my readers tweak them, I have coined this term as “Technology For A Layman”.

    How does that sound?

  6. I spent ages initially coming up for a short elevator for my blog a few months ago, but after reading the challenge here, I have already come up with a clearer and better pitch for my blog.

    Thanks Darren!

  7. No elevator pitch for my blog ,need to create one, thanks Darren all key points are covered ,looking forward for ur second article and mean while I try to get best pitch for my blog.

  8. Thanks Darren, I don’t realize if the elevator pitch is very important for my new blog (well a newbie) … But I will do this homework, find my elevator pitch, and then put it on the top of my blog :)

  9. Thanks for inspiring me to work on my “about me” page. It’s the first thing I read on other blogs but hadn’t paid much attention to my own.

  10. If your blog title is self-explanatory, is it necessary to have a tagline?

  11. XMPieman says: 04/06/2009 at 11:15 pm

    I am working towards a couple of blogs, one personal, one business…and may never the twain meet!

    The personal one is ‘The Goat File’, it’s elevator reads “What Gets Your Goat? Let Me Tell You What Got Mine Today…”

    My business one is ‘…Said The Pieman’ . “After 30 years in the communications industry, I know there are better ways to get your message out there than a spray and pray campaign. One-to-one, cross media, social media…Let me share them with you!”

  12. Here is my pitch for my blog BenSpark.com:

    “Everyday Photos… Every… Day… BenSpark.com is about my life through photography. Each image is a gateway to a story about my daily life. Occasionally funny, inspiring, interesting or creative BenSpark.com is real life in photos. With over 1400 consecutive days and five different cameras BenSpark.com has documented images from the mundane to the amazing.”

    And for my Blog ReadToMeDad.com

    “Children love to be read to, and by doing this parents help their kids develop a love of reading themselves. Read to Me, Dad reads and reviews various children’s books and offers parents suggestions for the best books for them and their kids.”

  13. I so appreciate this blog and this process. As simple as I thought blogging was, I now realize it has critical steps that must be taken and this 31 DBBB Day One breaks makes that clear.

    I am excited and feel empowered.

    Thank you so much and I look forward to Day 2.

  14. This “elevator pitch” had been buggin me for quite some time already. Thanks for some of the useful tips. Hopefully I can come up with something better this time round.

  15. Hi Darren,

    I am excited about this series. Thank you for hosting it.

    My blog is called Pink Ink and my tagline is “on life, liberty and my pursuit of ha-pink-ness”.

    I blog about things that make me happy…and I find that my readers come by to be “inspired” or to see the “silver lining”.

    This elevator-pitch concept is useful not just for blogs, but for book concepts (I write novels).

    Have a great week!

    -Jewel

  16. Great start Darren.

    After reading this post, I would have to reconsider my pitch for all my blogs :)

  17. So excited to be a part of this!

    Mine pitch is– An honest take on motherhood: The good, the bad and the scary.

    I’m trying to reach moms who have a sense of humor, and adore their children to death but can also admit to being driven crazy by them.

  18. Thanks, Darren!

    I think I’m going to go with something like “… a strength training site that helps women build beautiful healthy bodies.” I’ll be thinking hard about this throughout the day.

  19. New blog is under construction this month, hoping to emerge at the end a butterfly (or at least a Luna moth)

    Tagline: Passionate about Singapore Math

    Speech:I help elementary schools successfully implement the world’s top-scoring mathematics program. (Then i usually need to explain more about Singapore Math.)

  20. It is tough to write this elevator pitch for a more personal blog. Right now I’m working from the same line I came up with for Twitter, since what I’m ‘selling’ is me, and this shows my unique perspective:

    Creative copywriter in The Washington Post marketing department. I’m interested in ideas, solutions, observations re: DC, print/web design, marketing, advertising, and green living.

  21. First off, great start! I guess anyone who has been blogging for a while has this in the back of their minds, but this one gave the nudge and the push to me. I just have a question right now: in your situations (Darren’s as well as the others), have you ever used an elevator pitch that simply popped into your head or is it always something well thought out? I have this impression that if I can “get” it myself with a pop of a thought like that, surely most other persons would also. Is that a valid assumption?

    Thanks, and I hope I didn’t sounded so noobish :)

    Here to learn,

    Noel

  22. This is a great exercise. I always have a hard time explaining what I want to do or I am doing.

    Elevator Pitch: “I want to show you how to use open source technology to provide innovative business solutions.”

  23. I am blogging Dutch (http://www.marcoraaphorst.nl/), so here’s the translation:
    “a music composer with a trunk full of backstage stories”

  24. Hi Darren,
    Great article, great discussion in the comments here. Thanks so much for writing this series. My readership is growing, and I’m excited to learn more.
    My blog tagline is: Home Decor Ideas for Real People. With Real Stuff. And Real Budgets.
    I guess I should just expand a little on that to come up with an elevator pitch?

  25. I had a go at this for my musical theatre blog – not the best ever but here it is:

    Musicalverse promotes musical theatre productions around the UK and enables musical theatre fans to easily locate show merchandise they may not have picked up when they went to see a musical.

  26. I hope to get lots of hits and clicks on my google ads through this.

    Thanks for your advice.

  27. AW the elevator pitch. Being a product development
    consultant for the garment industry, I travel a great deal
    I love going to conventions and staying at a hotel right next to the convention. Even better sometimes the convention is at the hotel you are staying at. I wear my trade show or convention badge and look for others in my trade in the in
    elevator. Some of my best clients I have met in an elevator.
    I always have businesses cards ready to hand out safely tucked away in my plastic badge holder around my neck.

    I start the conversation out with asking if they are buying or selling.

  28. Thanks, it was a meaningful lesson.

    My blog is about jobs and careers and is linked to a job board, Aarknet.org. How about changing the elevator pitch from “Aarknet’s Official Blog” to “Tips and advice on jobs, careers and employment”?

  29. Great exercise – thanks. I am working on building an audience for my blog in advance of the launch of a new membership site and this was a reminder to keep the blog focused on the same content as the membership site.

    My audience is comprised of job seekers, career coaches, professional resume writers and recruiters and my goals are (a) to write posts that help job seekers and (b) to write posts that recruiters and coaches want to share with their clients/readers.

    My elevator pitch is “I help people take control of their job search .. and their careers.”

    Not very exciting, but great marketer I am not ;-)

  30. Thank you so much. I never read about “elevator pitch”. This is new for me but I think i put an elevator pitch when i created my blog ^^.

    I’ll wait for more.

  31. Thanks, you put a lot of info in there and gave me plenty to think about. If every day is like this I will not be able to keep up. It looks as though I will always be able to think about my blogs and improve upon them all the time
    Thanks

  32. My great blogger friend Alisa Bowman (http://www.projecthappilyeverafter.com/) sent me info on this series and challenged me to participate. I was worried at first, since I lead such a busy lifestyle and wasn’t sure I could fit this into my schedule–unemployed, looking for dates on craigslist, blogging here and there, the gym, a daily tanning session–you know how life can be for a Mexican living in New York City.

    But what a great way to kick off the show! Where to start?
    At the beginning–the Elevator pitch & FAQ section of my blog–I have my work cut out for me today. I just added all my links to the signature of my e-mails yesterday…now I have to go back an include my pitch…after I tan, of course.

    Looking forward to this entire challenge. And Alisa, thanks for the push!

    Nando

  33. Pretty excited to start this workshop today!

    Pitch: The Rogue Investor helps strengthen investors by teaching alternative investing strategies and disciplined portfolio management.

  34. My Elevator pitch is Balkhis shows bloggers a vision for success by helping them improve their skills in web development, seo, and marketing.

  35. I blog as the “Incurable Consultant,” and I’ve been trying to figure out which of two taglines to use:

    “Adventures in Doing Everything Better”

    or

    “Adventures in Living & Working Better, Smarter, and More Effectively”

    I like option 1 because it’s shorter and catchier. But I’m not sure if it explains things well enough, which is why I can’t quite decide if option 2 is better. Any thoughts?

  36. Great post, I think this challenge is going to be really interesting.

    I already have some level of elevator pitch within the description I use for search engines etc: “A blog for those with more interest in the web than expertise. Geekiness made simple.”

    I’m working on expanding this, and look forward to Day 2 of the challenge!

  37. Thanks Darren – I’m pretty thrilled to be doing this and having homework again!

    This exercise takes me right back to grad school and networking events I never went to – oops!

    Before today is over, I’m going to have a shiny new about page with my mission – which will include my elevator pitch.

    My one-sentence pitch is: Cake and Commerce is a personal food blog written by a 15 year veteran of the food industry that combines opinion, recipes, storytelling and photography. It won’t make you rich or smarter or better looking, but it will make you hungry.

  38. My business card pitch is “Shannon Ehlers – passionately Iowan”.

    My slightly longer, meeting-in-passing pitch is “Shannon Ehlers – one of three million strong living in the land between two rivers” (this is a reference to the Indian meaning of the word Iowa).

    Finally, my pitch to be delivered on the elevator is “Hi, I’m Shannon. I write a blog about living, working, and playing in the great state of Iowa. People have a misconception that nothing is happening in the middle of our country. This couldn’t be further from the truth. Take a look at shannonehlers.com or, as I call it, the ‘Midnight Blogger’ when you get a chance. Here’s my card to help you remember.”

  39. This has already got me thinking. Thanks!

  40. Maximizing marketing results for entrepreneurs with social media marketing. http://jeffkorhan.com

  41. Thanks Dave, I will modify it.

  42. My tag line is simple: Pakistan Politics, Current Affairs, Business and Life Style

    Gguess covered everything in it.

  43. The topic of my blog is on internet business toolbox. My elevator pitch is also my tagline: “Exploring Beneficial Online Tools for Profitable Business”.

  44. CrazzyCool provide hacks, tricks, tweaks and tips to overcome computer and Internet related problems without wasting money or time for people who use computers everyday.

    This is my Elevator pitch. Thank you very much Darren for starting 31 days to build a better blog.

    Cheers
    Sjay

  45. Great post for the first day! I hadn’t revisited my elevator speech since I began my blog nearly six months ago, so it this challenge came at the perfect time. Here’s what I came up with….

    This is my story – the story of an average woman living life and learning the tango of love with a not-so-average physical disability (Freeman-Sheldon Syndrome). Maybe you’ll discover that this is your story, too.

  46. I’m going to work on giving this a shot. It is not something that will return void. Even if one person reads about what is happening here, then the return is not void.

    Great post and I look forward to tomorrows.

  47. I love it already. I’ve got the creative juices flowing. Unfortunately my blog post is going to have to wait until my work day is done, but I’m excited for the project!

  48. Great start! I have been waiting and wondering. I am going to work on it today. I sort of already have an elevator pitch or two but I do need to expand on it. I need a tag line too. Be back later. I’ll post it and maybe get a critique or two.

    Thanks!

  49. I have a description on my blog, but not an elevator pitch. Thanks for this post I’ll think about it, and hopefully will come up with something good :)

  50. I know this comment is way too deep to be really be read, but I’ll say my piece anyway.

    To add to what you said, Darren, I think that if you can make people visualize something through your pitch, it will be much more memorable. A bunch of large words that convey too much meaning in a short time can easily be lost on listeners.

    Using a visualization might also be a great way to incorporate your logo if possible and therefore kill two birds with one stone.

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