Welcome to Day #1 of the 31 Days to Build a Better Blog Challenge. As on each day of this project today I’d like to present you with two things:
- Some Teaching/Theory
- A Task to go away and Do
Teaching
Today’s task (outlined in full below) is to develop an Elevator Pitch for your Blog. Let me explain why.
What is an Elevator Pitch?
“An elevator pitch is an overview of an idea for a product, service, or project. The name reflects the fact that an elevator pitch can be delivered in the time span of an elevator ride (for example, thirty seconds or 100-150 words).” – Wikipedia
Many business and self improvement type courses teach students to develop an elevator pitch for their business (and even for themselves). The idea is to have something short and sharp that you can say about yourself when the opportunity arises instead of bumbling your way through explaining what you or your business does (and miss an opportunity).
The goal is both to communicate what you do and to get the person you’re communicating it to to want to know more.
Elevator Pitches for Bloggers
While the idea of an elevator pitch is usually something that start up entrepreneurs are encouraged to do when looking for investors – developing an elevator pitch for your blog is also a smart move also.
One of the most important reasons to do this exercise is that to develop an elevator pitch YOU as a blogger to have thought through and crystallised in your mind what your blog is about.
If you’re fuzzy on what your blog is about it’s unlikely than anyone else will have much of an idea either.
Knowing what your blog is about helps you in developing every aspect of it including:
- Writing Content
- Promotion and Finding Readers
- Search Engine Optimisation
- Networking with other Bloggers
- Branding
- Design…. the list can go on.
In fact almost every task that we’ll be doing in this next 31 days should flow from this task.
Other Reasons for Developing an Elevator Pitch
Of course coming up with an elevator pitch is not just for your own benefit. Once you’ve got one it is brilliant for communicating what your blog is about to readers (both the ones you already have and potential ones), other bloggers, potential partners, media/journalists, advertisers and even to friends and family members who might not get what you’re doing.
Once you’ve got your blogs elevator pitch there’s no limit to the places and situations that you can use it (either part of it or in its entirety). Here are a few that come to mind:
- Your blogs tag line – having a short, sharp and descriptive ‘tag line’ for your blog can be a powerful technique for quickly communicating to new readers to your blog what it is all about. Readers who don’t get a sense for what your blog is about are in danger of leaving quickly – so a tagline that is displayed prominently on your blog can be a great way to hook them in.
- Your about page – the about page of a blog (if you have one) is one of the most read pages of a blog by first time visitors. It is an ideal place to communicate what you’re about and to ‘sell’ to potential readers why they should subscribe and come back.
- Real Life Conversation – whether it be at a conference, in business interactions or just in everyday conversation, the topic of your blog is likely to come up from time to time and these interactions can be an ideal moment to pull out the elevator pitch to describe what your blog is about.
- Business Cards – I get a lot of business cards given to me at conferences and to be honest at the end of the day I can’t remember who gave me most of them. Adding an elevator pitch to a card can help trigger who you are and what you do in the mind of those you chat with at these busy types of events.
- Pitching to Media – One of the things I’ve noticed about many journalists is that they’re very busy people who are constantly being pitched with ideas for stories. Having a thought through and effective ‘pitch’ can help you get noticed and give a journalist a reason to listen to what you’ve got to say.
- Pitching to Other Bloggers – Similarly, I find that if I’m being ‘pitched’ to as a blogger that I take more notice if the person pitching to me gives me a brief insight into who they are and what they do.
- Email Signature – many people have links to their blogs in their emails, but a link can be somewhat meaningless on its own. Why not add your elevator pitch? Similarly signatures in forums can be a good place to have a short description of what you do to motivate people to check you out further.
- Social Media Profiles – the same thing goes for all those social media profiles that you have. Why not use them to not only point people to your blog but to give them a reason to go there!
Where else would you use an elevator pitch? I’m sure there are so many more times to pull them out! Feel free to share other places you’ll be using yours.
Your Task for Today
Take some time out today to develop an elevator pitch for your blog. If you’ve already got one take a few minutes to review and refine it.
How to Write an Elevator Pitch for Your Blog
I’m sure there has been much written on the topic online but here’s some starting points that I use when doing this type of thing.
- Solve a Problem or Need – I’m a big believer in developing blogs that fulfil real needs and solve problems that people have. The problem need not be a big one (like World Peace) but you should be attempting to create something that people need on some level. Communicate this in your elevator pitch.
- Define Your Audience – who is your blog for? Who are you attempting to attract? IF your blog is targeting a certain demographic or type of person (and it may or may not) – include this in your pitch. If your blog is for teens, don’t develop a pitch for grandparents – target the reader you want.
- Be Clear – don’t leave people second guessing what you mean or interpreting jargon – make your elevator pitch crystal clear.
- Keep it Short – People have limited attention spans and capacity to absorb lots of information. Get to the point, eliminate unnecessary words and make it punchy!
- Stand Out – be willing to use humour or powerful imagery to grab the attention of those that hear your elevator pitch.
- Be Intriguing – your elevator pitch is unlikely to ‘convert’ people to read your blog all on its own – but it should entice them to learn more. You don’t need to say everything in it – but attempt to write something that is still in the mind of those who hear it long afterwards.
- Be Energetic but not Hyped – you convey more than just dry information when describing your blog – but you also convey what YOU feel about it. This is important – if you ‘pitch’ someone with language and a voice that is dry and uninspired you’re unlikely to convert anyone into a reader. Show people that you love what you’re doing, that you’re passionate and that you care about your topic. But don’t go too far and hype it up beyond what it is!
- Consider Using a Question – people are wired to answer and engage with questions. Ask them, even just rhetorical ones, in your pitch and you’ll hook people in.
- Be Ready to Expand Upon Your Pitch – at a recent conference I had someone come up and give me what seemed like an elevator pitch about their blog. It worked really well, they got me interested – so interested that I asked them to tell me more. The problem was that they didn’t really have much else to say about their blog. See an elevator pitch as a conversation opener – something designed to lead into further interaction with people. You don’t have to say it all in your initial pitch – but you should be ready to say more if people are interested.
These are just the thoughts that come to my mind on elevator pitches (what would you add?). Not everyone will be able to incorporate all of the above points but I hope that some of it will help you to develop yours.
My Elevator Pitch
I have a couple of elevator pitches my blog here at ProBlogger. One’s short (just 6 words) and one’s a little longer (a minute or so). I use one or the other of them depending upon the circumstances and opportunity to share.
My short one is very simple – ‘ProBlogger helps Bloggers Build Exceptional Blogs’. I’ve used others over the life of this blog (and continue to evolve it) but have settled on this one for the time being because it is so simple, to the point and clear.
The longer version expands upon this and shares some of the ways that the blog helps bloggers improve their blogs by talking through a few of the main topics I cover.
Write Your Elevator Pitch
Once you’ve got an elevator pitch for your blog write or print it out and put it somewhere near your computer so that as you blog you can be reminded of it. You might also like to start to incorporate it into your blog as a tagline or in your about page – or even to write a post about it on your blog to communicate to your readers what you’re on about (the appropriateness of writing it as a post will of course vary from blog to blog).
Once you’ve done that – feel free to share what you’ve come up with in comments below. I’m looking forward to reading yours.
Tomorrow on the 31 Days to Build a Better Blog Challenge – tomorrows task is a writing task that will have you writing a particular type of blog post to use on your blog in the next few days.
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hi darren. thanks for the 1st tips. I’m a new blogger. So, this is good for me. i never thought about elevator pitch before.
thanks and i’m looking forward for the next task.
Elevator pitch is a great idea. I find that those that can’t explain the essense of their idea in a brief period don’t have the command of the subject that they should.
Thangks for shared it .
but I do not think so !
i do not need to do it !
but I will come everyday
Thanks for a great kick-start this morning, Darren! I have been blogging for about a year, and I’m ready to make my Creative Perch really stand out and be meaningful.
The blog I am working on for this challenge is called Creative Perch. I haven’t finished the elevator pitch yet, but I created it to help inspire creativity and provide hands-on tools to create innovation. I thought my audience would be mostly creatives and techies, but the comments I have received reveal I have a wider audience than I expected.
I am really looking forward to the next thirty days of teaching/task. Thanks again, Darren!
little tip for Business Card: put a photo of your face on the back & people will remember you!
Great tips!! Excited about the 31 Days!
We used to call this a ‘mission statement’ but I like the idea of an ‘elevator pitch’ and will get to work on mine as it is currently suitable for only the longest of elevators!!
For all those writing taglines, a fantastic article that will help you is http://www.copyblogger.com/create-a-tagline/
Brilliant – start with focus, something I have strayed from.
Also prompts me to think more on maintaining more than one blog – both with clearly defined goals; one personal and casual and the other more technical and professional. The later being what I need to regain my focus for and the Elevator Pitch will help me do that.
This is also a great way to start planning out the process and marketing of re-branding and relaunching an already established blog.
Phill
I write a food and travel blog called FOODalogue: Meandering Meals and Travel. Would the words after the colon be my tag line or should I create another more descriptive one to follow…like, ‘an adventure in eating at home and on the road’? I think I just answered my own question. Yes, right?
Mine is short and sweet: “We make (really) awesome websites”
So are elevator pitches more effective when they are written for more specific purpose-oriented blogs? I just started mine and I like to write about a wide range of things…
Startup roach: a guide to starting up a company during your day job.
Are you tired of your menial, degrading day job? Did you ever have the dream to be your own boss? But you can’t just quit on the security and steady income of your day job? Learn how to start up a business during your day job with startuproach.wordpress.com!
I’d totally forgotten about this, got excited about it last week and then forgot! I run a photoblog so was not entirely sure how/if this series would benefit me but this has gotten me thinking already. Great work, look forward to the rest of the series.
Good morning, Darren! I tweeted you yesterday that I forgot to email you to let you know that I wrote two posts inspired by you, which helped me redefine my mission. But the mission is a lot longer and in-depth than an elevator pitch. I agree that it allows you to laser focus on what your blog is about and it’s always good, when you are becoming fuzzy, to remind yourself of your own pitch.
Thanks for this excellent post! I can tell that I’m going to love this 31 day challenge!!!
So glad things are finally starting up. I was actually looking forward to a Monday.. lol.
Any chance that someone could design a button for us to use on our blogs, announcing that we are taking the 31 day challenge, and then another one for once we have completed it? Just a suggestion. It’d be nice to be able to show that we are taking the challenge, and it would give our readers a chance to click over and get involved, too.
Great job. Can’t wait until tomorrow! :)
Thanks Darren, I’m a publisher and have encouraged all our authors to sign up to become better bloggers, we’re all looking forward to the next 30 days…
At first thought the first day seems very easy indeed, but at second thought I sometimes wonder what my blog is about.
Very good post that motivates to think again.
Thank your for this!
I have had one for a while “auctioneers to the property industry” pretty basic what are your thoughts?
I an really looking forward to the rest of this series. My blog Advanced Fantasy Baseball is starting to do well but I have definitely been winging it a little too much. I’m hoping this series will help me tighten things up and judging by the first post (a great one) that’s exactly what it will do.
Great Start Darren. Nice easy task to start off with. Looking forward to further tasks. I kept my elevator pitch short and clear. How’s this?
“AceStartups – Discover the Internets Best Web 2.0 Startups”
The day is here! I’m quite excited. I run several blogs but I want to concentrate fully on Book Marketing Buzz, then incorporate all this into my other blogs. I agree with you…the elevator speech comes in handy for a lot of things. When you are applying to blog directories, for example, they ask you what your blog is about and if you get stumped right there, you’re in trouble.
Okay, I have a short and long elevator speech like you – the shorter one “Book Marketing and Promotion Tips” and the longer one – Book promotion tips, ongoing promotional series geared toward the published author to help them market their books, and even a few SEO tips thrown in to help you optimize your author website or blog.
excellent first post with some thought-provoking information. Thank you for taking the time to run this course. I’ll be giving my elevator pitch some serious consideration this afternoon!
I am a homeschooling mom who is saving dollars and sense by bringing you all the best deals, coupons, freebies, giveaways, and ideas that I can find on This Side of Eternity, and looking to serve the King in all I do.
For my ‘Style PA blogs, my tag line has been ‘hints, tips, tricks and trends for effortless style’ from the start. Simple and snappy I think.
I am in the process of starting up a new blog covering workplace design. I have named this Workspace Style and come up with a new tag line – ‘covering inspiring, innovative and interesting workplace design’.
A little bit of alliteration can be good right? I may tweak it as I am literally 2 days into this new project.
My tag line is “Organizing the way you live work and play.”
Elevator speech in short is “I blog to help people organize the way they live work and play.”
Longer version could expand on how I do that.
“Through my blog I provide tips, ideas and inspiration to help people organize the way they live work and play. I provide affordable virtual solutions for people wanting to get organized and need help from a professional organizer.”
Something like that. I’ll work on it. Anyone feel free to let me know what you think. I can use all the help I can get.
Darren thanks for this series. It will help so many people.
Cool that the challenge has started.
I’m looking forward for the teachings and tasks to come!
C ya!!
Claus :-)
Great post – i am posting my assignments on my blog everyday for my readers to see what i am doing and for them to keep me motivated.
Is your business web site and effective marketing tool? Off the Fence helps business and bloggers build an online presence and understand the daunting world of new media.
I decided to be simple with mine:
NerdFitness.com – Helping nerds level up their lives, one day at a time.
I have an elevator pitch/tagline already–“Using the virtuous woman of Proverbs 31 as a springboard for growth as a Christian woman, from household management to relationships, business pursuits, cooking, and more”. It could use some tweaking, but I really need to work on my expanded, explanatory version.
http://www.avirtuouswoman.info
Here’s what I came up with:
Learn about “politically incorrect” health & nutrition topics at http://www.KellytheKitchenKop.com.
I’ll probably change it 10 times in the next hour…
Am thinking of something along the lines of “Everything you need to know about Japan and beyond”
My site is FiberArtistToo and my short pitch is “From sheep to shawl”
Darren, sometimes this is easier said than done, The power of the pitch is ery real, I have sites that are clear cut, Free wordpress themes and profesional install, Easy enough, then I have niches that sound crazy when I tell otheres about them, They just don’t realize that there is a market for everything, it’s the odvious things that everyone goes after, how many blogs are there about making money, and 99% dont make 10 bucks a month, find a Real Niche blog then sometimes writing the elevator pitch becomes harder when you try and make something so small seem so big.
My current ‘short’ pitch is “Living a Whole Life – a guide to health and well-being through holistic nutrition & naturopathy”
I often find myself calling it a ‘healthy lifestyle’ blog when I talk to people. This sounds a little less formal and more inclusive since we talk about lots of different subjects like exercise and greener living in addition to holistic nutrition and naturopathy.
I will have to spend some time trying to expand the healthy lifestyle idea into a little bit more detailed description this week.
Thanks for the thought starter!
i just received your 1st task..this is first time i involve with.I can’t get what the task need..anyone can explain more? hit me at my blog if u can
Great idea, Darren.
My Elevator Pitch goes: “Helps you to understand yourself and others better” because my blog is arount “personality”
Thanks.
Here is mine, thoughts?
“Food Review with a Twist:
We here at Gimmie Something to Eat (GS2E) wanna eat your food and help those in the world who are hungry in the process.
Sound too good to be true? Well, actually too good to pass up! Send us your food to eat. We will record us eating and critiquing your product, and entertain you all the way to the food bank.
Only one dollar a day, $1xday of the year. January 1 = $1, December 31 = $365. 2009 has been prorated until the end of the year.
We will donate a portion of our proceeds to a TBA food bank. For every day sold we will donate $1, for every month that we sell out we will donate $300. If we sell out the entire year we will donate $5000.”
My blog is WPMU Tutorials – full-blow tutorials, tips & tricks for setting up and running a multi-blog network with WordPressMU, the software behind sites like wordpress.com.
I have been using “Legitimate ways to earn money and gift cards online”, as my tagline, for awhile now. This article has made me realize, a want something new.
I am so excited this challenge is finally underway. This was a great first post. It is imperative that you can sell yourself in a few short minutes. I’ve had some training on entrepeneurship in the past and undertsand the importance of having that 30 second commercial. Currently the tagline on the my blog’s template is “Awakening to the Spiritual Reality of Life”. I think it is very fitting for my blog because my goal is to help readers awaken to a more spiritual way of thinking and living.
I need to go back and expand my “About” page. I will do that today as well as develop a longer elevator pitch.
Thanks Darren.
Hey Darren, I have a site that only deals with eyelashes, when i tell people my site’s about eyelash growth most look at me like Im crazy. The market for womens eyelash care is much bigger than people realize, coming up with the elevator pitch is even more important ot a site such as mine, Im working on one so that people will say “Oh, I get it That sound’s really interesting, I will post the pitch when I find it, great post look forward to more, any ideas for http://bambilashes.com/ I would love to hear some pitches
Hey thanks Darren
My blog is called IP Think Tank, the elevator pitch is simply – Intellectual Property Strategy, Globally
Cheers
Duncan
Great post!
I teach my students something similar but call it the 30 second commercial.
Here’s the components of a good . . .
30 Second Commercial
1) What do you do (so a 2nd grader can understand)
2) Trigger pain points for ideal prospect saying, “Typically, my best clients are frustrated by a, tired of b and c, and . . . ”
3) One liner about the biggest benefit your product/service provides
4) Get a “yes” by asking something as simple as, “Does that make sense?”
It’s a great way to explain what you do, target motivated prospects, pique interest, and get the prospects head moving up and down all in just 30 seconds . . .
Darren,
Thanks for a great start to the 31DBBB! I have always believed that if you can’t sum up what you do in a sentence or two, you need to have a good hard look at yourself and work it out!
My blog came out of my frustration at the eLearning community. There are a lot of experts (and no offence is intended by this statement) that talk theory after theory but never give anything concrete to actually ‘do’. Application is completely pased over! So I set out to make my blog about the application of elearning. Tools, concepts, whatever tickles my fancy. Hence my elevator pitch was born:
‘The eLearning tools blog where theory meets application and reality reigns’
Hey its a bit brassy, but it sums it up. I’m looking forward to working with you to refine my blog presence. Thanks for providing the opportunity to do so :)
Matt
Thanks Darren. Made me think. Will find what is the USP of my blog. It clears me and increases my focus. Looking forward for the next installment.
Day one for the 31DBBB is going good so far.I love this post. As for me Im running a blog called TipsGoda Dot Com (about dating,love and romance) and my tagline is “Daily Tips on Dating and Relationship to Make You a Better Lover”
I hope that explains a bit about my blog.
My question is , if i already have an about page and change it should i post it as well or just leave it there?
The Producer – The first two paragraphs I like – they get the point across and are punchy. The 2nd two do seem to get a little muddled as you go into the details though. I’d stay stick to the same style as in the first 2 paragraphs as you go for the kill.
I’m an entrepreneur at heart, and I always have an elevator pitch ready for my businesses. I don’t know why I never created one for my blog. Here’s my shot at it:
Food Renegade challenges politically correct nutrition and connects real people with Real Food — food that’s old and traditional. If it’s the product of industrialization, or something your great grandmother wouldn’t have recognized as food, it’s not Real Food.
(For those times when a bit more explanation is warranted: My readers are lovers of sustainable agriculture, local food, slow food, grass-fed meats & dairy, and raw & fermented food.)
iCan’t Internet, but together we can learn!