Welcome to Day #1 of the 31 Days to Build a Better Blog Challenge. As on each day of this project today I’d like to present you with two things:
- Some Teaching/Theory
- A Task to go away and Do
Teaching
Today’s task (outlined in full below) is to develop an Elevator Pitch for your Blog. Let me explain why.
What is an Elevator Pitch?
“An elevator pitch is an overview of an idea for a product, service, or project. The name reflects the fact that an elevator pitch can be delivered in the time span of an elevator ride (for example, thirty seconds or 100-150 words).” – Wikipedia
Many business and self improvement type courses teach students to develop an elevator pitch for their business (and even for themselves). The idea is to have something short and sharp that you can say about yourself when the opportunity arises instead of bumbling your way through explaining what you or your business does (and miss an opportunity).
The goal is both to communicate what you do and to get the person you’re communicating it to to want to know more.
Elevator Pitches for Bloggers
While the idea of an elevator pitch is usually something that start up entrepreneurs are encouraged to do when looking for investors – developing an elevator pitch for your blog is also a smart move also.
One of the most important reasons to do this exercise is that to develop an elevator pitch YOU as a blogger to have thought through and crystallised in your mind what your blog is about.
If you’re fuzzy on what your blog is about it’s unlikely than anyone else will have much of an idea either.
Knowing what your blog is about helps you in developing every aspect of it including:
- Writing Content
- Promotion and Finding Readers
- Search Engine Optimisation
- Networking with other Bloggers
- Branding
- Design…. the list can go on.
In fact almost every task that we’ll be doing in this next 31 days should flow from this task.
Other Reasons for Developing an Elevator Pitch
Of course coming up with an elevator pitch is not just for your own benefit. Once you’ve got one it is brilliant for communicating what your blog is about to readers (both the ones you already have and potential ones), other bloggers, potential partners, media/journalists, advertisers and even to friends and family members who might not get what you’re doing.
Once you’ve got your blogs elevator pitch there’s no limit to the places and situations that you can use it (either part of it or in its entirety). Here are a few that come to mind:
- Your blogs tag line – having a short, sharp and descriptive ‘tag line’ for your blog can be a powerful technique for quickly communicating to new readers to your blog what it is all about. Readers who don’t get a sense for what your blog is about are in danger of leaving quickly – so a tagline that is displayed prominently on your blog can be a great way to hook them in.
- Your about page – the about page of a blog (if you have one) is one of the most read pages of a blog by first time visitors. It is an ideal place to communicate what you’re about and to ‘sell’ to potential readers why they should subscribe and come back.
- Real Life Conversation – whether it be at a conference, in business interactions or just in everyday conversation, the topic of your blog is likely to come up from time to time and these interactions can be an ideal moment to pull out the elevator pitch to describe what your blog is about.
- Business Cards – I get a lot of business cards given to me at conferences and to be honest at the end of the day I can’t remember who gave me most of them. Adding an elevator pitch to a card can help trigger who you are and what you do in the mind of those you chat with at these busy types of events.
- Pitching to Media – One of the things I’ve noticed about many journalists is that they’re very busy people who are constantly being pitched with ideas for stories. Having a thought through and effective ‘pitch’ can help you get noticed and give a journalist a reason to listen to what you’ve got to say.
- Pitching to Other Bloggers – Similarly, I find that if I’m being ‘pitched’ to as a blogger that I take more notice if the person pitching to me gives me a brief insight into who they are and what they do.
- Email Signature – many people have links to their blogs in their emails, but a link can be somewhat meaningless on its own. Why not add your elevator pitch? Similarly signatures in forums can be a good place to have a short description of what you do to motivate people to check you out further.
- Social Media Profiles – the same thing goes for all those social media profiles that you have. Why not use them to not only point people to your blog but to give them a reason to go there!
Where else would you use an elevator pitch? I’m sure there are so many more times to pull them out! Feel free to share other places you’ll be using yours.
Your Task for Today
Take some time out today to develop an elevator pitch for your blog. If you’ve already got one take a few minutes to review and refine it.
How to Write an Elevator Pitch for Your Blog
I’m sure there has been much written on the topic online but here’s some starting points that I use when doing this type of thing.
- Solve a Problem or Need – I’m a big believer in developing blogs that fulfil real needs and solve problems that people have. The problem need not be a big one (like World Peace) but you should be attempting to create something that people need on some level. Communicate this in your elevator pitch.
- Define Your Audience – who is your blog for? Who are you attempting to attract? IF your blog is targeting a certain demographic or type of person (and it may or may not) – include this in your pitch. If your blog is for teens, don’t develop a pitch for grandparents – target the reader you want.
- Be Clear – don’t leave people second guessing what you mean or interpreting jargon – make your elevator pitch crystal clear.
- Keep it Short – People have limited attention spans and capacity to absorb lots of information. Get to the point, eliminate unnecessary words and make it punchy!
- Stand Out – be willing to use humour or powerful imagery to grab the attention of those that hear your elevator pitch.
- Be Intriguing – your elevator pitch is unlikely to ‘convert’ people to read your blog all on its own – but it should entice them to learn more. You don’t need to say everything in it – but attempt to write something that is still in the mind of those who hear it long afterwards.
- Be Energetic but not Hyped – you convey more than just dry information when describing your blog – but you also convey what YOU feel about it. This is important – if you ‘pitch’ someone with language and a voice that is dry and uninspired you’re unlikely to convert anyone into a reader. Show people that you love what you’re doing, that you’re passionate and that you care about your topic. But don’t go too far and hype it up beyond what it is!
- Consider Using a Question – people are wired to answer and engage with questions. Ask them, even just rhetorical ones, in your pitch and you’ll hook people in.
- Be Ready to Expand Upon Your Pitch – at a recent conference I had someone come up and give me what seemed like an elevator pitch about their blog. It worked really well, they got me interested – so interested that I asked them to tell me more. The problem was that they didn’t really have much else to say about their blog. See an elevator pitch as a conversation opener – something designed to lead into further interaction with people. You don’t have to say it all in your initial pitch – but you should be ready to say more if people are interested.
These are just the thoughts that come to my mind on elevator pitches (what would you add?). Not everyone will be able to incorporate all of the above points but I hope that some of it will help you to develop yours.
My Elevator Pitch
I have a couple of elevator pitches my blog here at ProBlogger. One’s short (just 6 words) and one’s a little longer (a minute or so). I use one or the other of them depending upon the circumstances and opportunity to share.
My short one is very simple – ‘ProBlogger helps Bloggers Build Exceptional Blogs’. I’ve used others over the life of this blog (and continue to evolve it) but have settled on this one for the time being because it is so simple, to the point and clear.
The longer version expands upon this and shares some of the ways that the blog helps bloggers improve their blogs by talking through a few of the main topics I cover.
Write Your Elevator Pitch
Once you’ve got an elevator pitch for your blog write or print it out and put it somewhere near your computer so that as you blog you can be reminded of it. You might also like to start to incorporate it into your blog as a tagline or in your about page – or even to write a post about it on your blog to communicate to your readers what you’re on about (the appropriateness of writing it as a post will of course vary from blog to blog).
Once you’ve done that – feel free to share what you’ve come up with in comments below. I’m looking forward to reading yours.
Tomorrow on the 31 Days to Build a Better Blog Challenge – tomorrows task is a writing task that will have you writing a particular type of blog post to use on your blog in the next few days.
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Short version:
“Girlgetstrong.com is a fun and informative website where three regular women, aka the Get Strong Girls, share their unique –and often zany – fitness adventures.”
Long version, add:
“The Get Strong Girls amuse, inspire, educate and challenge readers to join them on their comical journey to become stronger women.
More than just a blog, the website offers something for everyone as the Get Strong Girls also provide their own quirky perspectives on the latest health and fitness news, research and issues.
There’s also a pinch of celebrity fitness dirt just to keep it real – real fun, that is!”
whew! Thoughts?
I created a blog post on my site about the elevator pitch. I’d love comments on my site or any kind of feedback.
I’m Taking the 31 Days to Build a Better Blog Challenge
Essentially, I’m a comic book letterer and graphic designer looking to cut a hole in this very small niche area of creating comics.
My short pitch is
My life as a 30-something inner-westie, crazy cat lady, cupcake nutbag and web monkey
Think I’ll need more time to come up with a longer one…
I decided to write a full post on my blog about this, but the short version is that my blog (why I hate theropods) is nothing more than an outlet for spouting off about different living things that interest me, usually reptiles, sometimes fish, and more rarely plants.
A blog about nothing, but always something different and hopefully interesting. :-)
Chiming in way late and trying to catch up.
How appropriate for the first task.
If I don’t know what my blog is about, how do I expect anyone else to figure it out?
sketches and impressions – my drawing blog
watch my creative journey as I draw the stuff around me
I feel like a fool to have not ever thought of point #1 before you showed me. Can’t wait to learn the rest of your program. Thanks for pointing this out to someone who should’ve known better. Now , to create the right pitch, hmmm, need to think.
Day 1 completed! I’ll probably rework it–it isn’t as punchy as I’d like, but I enjoyed the process. It really helped me cement what I was on about, and where I want to go. Thanks for the great post!
i started my Green Goddess blog just to take this class: grengds.blogspot.com
here’s my tag:
Make your home clean and green
Hi
thank you Darren for everything.
this is my elevator pitch short version “let’s start talking business” wretten in my banner.
my longer version is ” Welcome to the Speech Starter. Here you will find tips and idea for entrepreneurs to have great start into business world ,better planning and more profit earning”
Despite coming into the challenge late, I’m having fun so far. Here’s my first effort:
http://madysondesigns.com/blog/general/2009/04/31-day-challenge-day-1/
Perfect timing on this challenge – I’m just a few days behind, but am starting my brand new blog. Here’s my elevator pitch:
Power Lessons, Tips, And Secrets To Help You Play Piano – And Sound Like A Pro – Fast.
I’m branding myself as “The Communications Maven”; and my tagline is “Helping People Become Extraordinary Communicators”.
I haven’t gotten any further than that yet!!
I had not read before this strategy, very valuable…thanks
My Site is The Wandering Boots and my elevator pitch is:
“Food and dining experiences of a boot enthusiast.”
Short Pitch: Giving you the keys to unlock the online world!
Long Pitch: Unlock The Online World was created to help people learn more about the happenings in the online world. It follows my own experiences so that people can learn from my mistakes and benefit from my successes!
I’m a bit late to the party as I’m just starting today, but this did make me think a bit. My blog is really just a chronicle of how I’m learning to draw and paint, with some other crafty stuff and ramblings thrown in for good measure. But I figure I might as well try and make it interesting for others to read! With that in mind, I suppose my short pitch would have to be something like “the arty adventures of a complete beginner”. I don’t know. I need to get my thinking cap on.
Ok, I am feeling way out of my league, but here goes…
This is for my first ever blog which I hope will help me not only make friends and expand my personal development, but will also introduce my art quilts.
Tag line: Ardea’s Nest: Musings and Art Quilts of a (nearly) empty nester.
Long version: Hi, Welcome to my first ever blog! I am the mother of two and my youngest will soon be off to college (Go Buckeyes!). My husband and I are settling into our empty nest and I am finding time to explore things I love – art quilts, crafting, sewing and thinking grown up thoughts!
How’s this for a one liner:
http://www.AmeliaBurton.com.au is a Health and Fitness blog that educates, motivates and inspires people to get moving and get real about their health.
Elevator Pitch:
I am a health and fitness coach that has witnessed the incredible effect vitality has on people and I want to inspire as many as possible to jump on the band wagon.
We all need motivation and sometimes a little knowledge ignites the spark of motivation, so the core of my blog is education. But I am also a complete fitness nut so I throw in reviews on the latest fitness products, entertaining stories, and crazy experiences I have had on my fitness journey.
My readers are interactive, leave great comments, ask me questions and very generous in sharing their personal experiences. So the next time you need a pick-me-up, don’t reach for the chocolate bar, come and visit my blog!
Amelia
Better late than never, in 109 words:
Forex Crunch is a blog all about the foreign exchange market. It includes and will include: tutorials, basics of the forex market, daily and weekly forex analysis, technical analysis, forex software posts, and whatever is related to Forex.
Forex Crunch aims to deal with forex trading, but with a more personal touch. This means that I don’t cover everything, but I do follow up on stories and analysis that I’ve written in the past. It means that humor is also a part of this blog and that currency pairs are sometimes treated in a sentimental. Also pure techies will admit that there’s a lot of sentiment in forex trading.
Right now my tagline is “faith,hope, affiliate & network marketing & anything else that’s on my mind” it sucks yes?
I started a blog to promote my business but it has just evolved into something else altogether. My goal is to educate those who want to be in a business, are new to a business, or just don’t know how to work a business.
Hmmm, maybe that’s my elevator pitch:)
I’m A Hot Mom is all about empowering moms to feel good about themselves and be their best.
What a great first post! Thanks for inspiring me.
I changed my tagline to:
it’s so easy to be gluten free!
My goal is to help people ease into being gluten free with easy and delicious and healthy recipes.
~Ellen
http://www.Iamglutenfree.blogspot.com
it’s so easy to be gluten free!
My tagline is “Coaching You to Take Inspired Action”!
Elevator pitch (being reworked) is: I coach young professionals to take inspired action and create their dream careers.
I’m running a little behind due to other priorities. I did complete day one though and will try to catch or keep up.
Thanks,
Mark
Blogs tag line…. Helping you share your message with the world.
Elevator Pitch… I am a tribal leader for tribal leaders. I help equip self employed professionals such as coaches, consultants, trainers, therapists, authors, and speakers with the right tools to connect with their tribes and grow their businesses both on and offline.
Thanks for a great kick-off, Darren!
I completely revamped my userinfo page (I use LJ for my platform) thanks to this post.
Blog Name: lectitans
Tag Line: Reading eagerly and often
Short Pitch: lectitans chronicles one woman’s reactions to the things she reads.
Long Pitch: At lectitans, I review books, post reading-related internet memes, interview authors, participate in and publicize book-related events, and advocate for multiple literacies.
I finally got the first day done:
Blog Name: Simply Dawn
Tag Line: I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me — as long as somebody watches my kids!
This is fantastic. Here is the elevator-type pitch I use on my website/blog:
Tagline- Lori Henry, Travel Writer, Actor and Cultural Dance Gal
Follow Lori Henry’s adventures as a travel writer while she globetrots around the world. Her blog covers destinations all over the map and posts include her signature “What I Liked” section. Lori Henry is currently researching cultural dancing.
Thanks for this challenge! I am very excited to see where it takes me and to see the improvements I know it is going to bring. I have finally completed this Day 1 task and already feel more focused and driven! Thanks!
Dive: Notes from the Music Underground
Discover the best independent bands and music you won’t see in Rolling Stone, Spin magazine or on MTV — this ain’t your momma’s music magazine.
Thank you so much for this Day 1 Problogger tip. I am a bit behind but I am very glad I am starting to blog like a pro. I already did the list activity too. This is actually fun.
Here it is:
My name is Elizabeth Rangel and I am the owner of Blissful Seed. We provide 100% organic cotton t-shirts to eco-minded people. Our dyes are low-impact and the inks used for the designs are water based. People can connect and discuss environmental designs and innovations through online forums. Blissful Seed strives to promote organic apparel with the carbon footprint and community in mind.
What do you think?
Thanks for this guide, Darren. Made me think. I came up with two ‘elevator pitch’ blurbs, one long and the other short.
Short Elevator Pitch for Money.Power.Wisdom:
“Money.Power.Wisdom helps information marketers turn words into massive wealth.”
Longer Elevator Pitch:
“I blog to show information marketers how to turn words into massive wealth. My own infopreneur business sponsors expensive heart surgery for under-privileged children with congenital heart defects. My blog, Money.Power.Wisdom, teaches you a similar approach to follow your dream too.”
– – –
All feedback/suggestions/comments welcome to improve, hone and tweak them, thank you :-)
All success
Dr.Mani
I just joined the Pro-Blogger Challenge, so I’m catching up – but I love this whole idea! Thanks for coming up with it and helping new bloggers like me out!
Here’s my elevator pitch:
Short Version:
My blog is about helping businesses achieve success through customer service excellence.
Long Version:
My blog is about helping businesses learn how to increase profits, gain customer loyalty and retention, and become the front-runner in any industry through customer service excellence.
I’m just now starting this because my husband had to have surgery and stay in the hospital at the true beginning of the challenge. He is home recovering and I’m now able to get started.
Short Tag Line: Making Travel Fun For The Whole Family
About page: Because some of my best memories are of traveling as a child, this website features the places we want to travel with our kids and highlights the kid friendly hotels, restaurants and attractions for the location, along with any tips that will make the overall experience more enjoyable. We all deserve to see the world through the eyes of our children.
What a great start to the 31Day Challenge. This post was just what I needed to refocus on my all-too-sporadic blog. Even now I feel a lot clearer about why I am writing and who I am writing for. Nice one. Can’t wait for Day 2!
Lord, I don’t know how you will read all these, but here’s my pitch at Plum Duff…not your ordinary gruel!
http://theplumduff.blogspot.com/2009/04/up-down-elevator.html
My tagline is below:
Offering you a slice of pop culture; music, TV, films, books, fashion and magazines.
http://themusingsofondolady.blogspot.com/
Thanks Darren,
Till yet i was not believing in creating an elivator pitch but thanks to you who make me so to consider it.
Now I’ll write an elevator pitch tonite, both short one & descriptin one and tomorrow I’ll comeup here with an elivator pitch, Sure.
Thanks again
I’ve relocated my disclaimer to another page (that will be connected with an asterisk link).
so far the best thing I can come up with is…
A LITTLE HODGE, A LITTLE PODGE
musings from the mind
Of NightRains
I think that covers it, but I’m really not sure, since my blogging style is quite varied in content. Well, I suppose that does cover it then. lol
:-)
Thanks for this series.
My pitch line on the header is simply “Hard Rock & Heavy Metal Music Reviews”
About Pitch:
The GEARS OF ROCK honors everything that rules the genres of hard rock, heavy metal, classic rock, alternative, modern rock, and punk. This website features daily album reviews, track-by-track reviews, concert reviews, music news, rock video game reviews, song countdowns, upcoming rock releases of importance, miscellaneous rock links, rock music bummers, and an occasional legitimate music article. You will encounter some sarcastic and tongue-in-cheek humor as well as seriously written material…you’ve been warned.
Excellent! I’ve got my elevator pitch already in place, but I’ve learnt some other handy tips from this (eg, I will add my ‘subscribe’ option to my ‘about me’ page). Can I offer you some advice? Possessive ‘s’s at the end of words need apostrophes (eg, “your blogs tagline” should be “your blog’s tagline”). Hope that doesn’t sound pedantic: it’s just that I’m guessing one of your 31 days will include how important spelling and punctuation are.
This is great timing for me as I’m just starting a new blog/website for a completely different wedding photography proposition:
Contemporary Wedding Photography for the modern Bride:
“Are you tired of seeing the same old boring wedding photos everywhere you go?
Do all the different wedding packages give you a headache?
If you answer yes to either of those questions: This blog and our revolutionary approach to wedding photography could be the answer to your prayers.
Articles packed with useful hints and tips will help you successfully plan your amazing wedding day and honeymoon.
Your day will not be taken over with our unobtrusive approach to wedding photography. However, you will be amazed with the results!
If you like things simple and straightforward, you will love our one price wedding package – making life easy for you!”
This is literally my only content so far. Need to catch up with these tasks as I’m starting late. But this could not have been more timely.
Thanks Darren.
Pat
PatB Wedding Photography
The thing a love about this step is that it can be incorporated into any business. I have a freelance writing business and write a blog Am I Really a Writer? that is focused on helping other writers be successful. This is a great step that I will be sharing with my readers. Their “elevator pitch” can very well make people interested in their services. All business owners should have one!
Emily
Thanks for the blog help! I just started a new blog, so a little insight is just what I need. My elevator pitch is:
A Child at Play: simple and fun ideas to get kids off the couch and on the floor.
My short elevator speech: Finding windfall funds for non-profits
My long elevator speech:
FindYourMoney is a charitable endeavour aimed at identifying unknown resources for non-profits. These could be funds that legally belong to the organization but were never transmitted to it for a variety of reasons. FindYourMoney also intends to search for money for private individuals if they agree to contribute 10% of their unexpected receipts to charity. This is a win-win-win situation.
http://experiencingeachmoment.blogspot.com/2009/04/31dbbb-assignment-1.html
Here’s my first attempt:
Fit for Faith
No gain without Payne; the blog shares fitness & faith matters
Tag line: The Intersection of Faith and Special Needs Parenting
Elevator Pitch: A virtual meeting place for parents of children with special needs who value the impact of their spiritual life on their parenting.
The tag line is incorporated on the banner of my blog. I need to work on finding more ways to use these to market it.
Great first post! Thanks… Here goes
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