Welcome to Day #1 of the 31 Days to Build a Better Blog Challenge. As on each day of this project today I’d like to present you with two things:
- Some Teaching/Theory
- A Task to go away and Do
Teaching
Today’s task (outlined in full below) is to develop an Elevator Pitch for your Blog. Let me explain why.
What is an Elevator Pitch?
“An elevator pitch is an overview of an idea for a product, service, or project. The name reflects the fact that an elevator pitch can be delivered in the time span of an elevator ride (for example, thirty seconds or 100-150 words).” – Wikipedia
Many business and self improvement type courses teach students to develop an elevator pitch for their business (and even for themselves). The idea is to have something short and sharp that you can say about yourself when the opportunity arises instead of bumbling your way through explaining what you or your business does (and miss an opportunity).
The goal is both to communicate what you do and to get the person you’re communicating it to to want to know more.
Elevator Pitches for Bloggers
While the idea of an elevator pitch is usually something that start up entrepreneurs are encouraged to do when looking for investors – developing an elevator pitch for your blog is also a smart move also.
One of the most important reasons to do this exercise is that to develop an elevator pitch YOU as a blogger to have thought through and crystallised in your mind what your blog is about.
If you’re fuzzy on what your blog is about it’s unlikely than anyone else will have much of an idea either.
Knowing what your blog is about helps you in developing every aspect of it including:
- Writing Content
- Promotion and Finding Readers
- Search Engine Optimisation
- Networking with other Bloggers
- Branding
- Design…. the list can go on.
In fact almost every task that we’ll be doing in this next 31 days should flow from this task.
Other Reasons for Developing an Elevator Pitch
Of course coming up with an elevator pitch is not just for your own benefit. Once you’ve got one it is brilliant for communicating what your blog is about to readers (both the ones you already have and potential ones), other bloggers, potential partners, media/journalists, advertisers and even to friends and family members who might not get what you’re doing.
Once you’ve got your blogs elevator pitch there’s no limit to the places and situations that you can use it (either part of it or in its entirety). Here are a few that come to mind:
- Your blogs tag line – having a short, sharp and descriptive ‘tag line’ for your blog can be a powerful technique for quickly communicating to new readers to your blog what it is all about. Readers who don’t get a sense for what your blog is about are in danger of leaving quickly – so a tagline that is displayed prominently on your blog can be a great way to hook them in.
- Your about page – the about page of a blog (if you have one) is one of the most read pages of a blog by first time visitors. It is an ideal place to communicate what you’re about and to ‘sell’ to potential readers why they should subscribe and come back.
- Real Life Conversation – whether it be at a conference, in business interactions or just in everyday conversation, the topic of your blog is likely to come up from time to time and these interactions can be an ideal moment to pull out the elevator pitch to describe what your blog is about.
- Business Cards – I get a lot of business cards given to me at conferences and to be honest at the end of the day I can’t remember who gave me most of them. Adding an elevator pitch to a card can help trigger who you are and what you do in the mind of those you chat with at these busy types of events.
- Pitching to Media – One of the things I’ve noticed about many journalists is that they’re very busy people who are constantly being pitched with ideas for stories. Having a thought through and effective ‘pitch’ can help you get noticed and give a journalist a reason to listen to what you’ve got to say.
- Pitching to Other Bloggers – Similarly, I find that if I’m being ‘pitched’ to as a blogger that I take more notice if the person pitching to me gives me a brief insight into who they are and what they do.
- Email Signature – many people have links to their blogs in their emails, but a link can be somewhat meaningless on its own. Why not add your elevator pitch? Similarly signatures in forums can be a good place to have a short description of what you do to motivate people to check you out further.
- Social Media Profiles – the same thing goes for all those social media profiles that you have. Why not use them to not only point people to your blog but to give them a reason to go there!
Where else would you use an elevator pitch? I’m sure there are so many more times to pull them out! Feel free to share other places you’ll be using yours.
Your Task for Today
Take some time out today to develop an elevator pitch for your blog. If you’ve already got one take a few minutes to review and refine it.
How to Write an Elevator Pitch for Your Blog
I’m sure there has been much written on the topic online but here’s some starting points that I use when doing this type of thing.
- Solve a Problem or Need – I’m a big believer in developing blogs that fulfil real needs and solve problems that people have. The problem need not be a big one (like World Peace) but you should be attempting to create something that people need on some level. Communicate this in your elevator pitch.
- Define Your Audience – who is your blog for? Who are you attempting to attract? IF your blog is targeting a certain demographic or type of person (and it may or may not) – include this in your pitch. If your blog is for teens, don’t develop a pitch for grandparents – target the reader you want.
- Be Clear – don’t leave people second guessing what you mean or interpreting jargon – make your elevator pitch crystal clear.
- Keep it Short – People have limited attention spans and capacity to absorb lots of information. Get to the point, eliminate unnecessary words and make it punchy!
- Stand Out – be willing to use humour or powerful imagery to grab the attention of those that hear your elevator pitch.
- Be Intriguing – your elevator pitch is unlikely to ‘convert’ people to read your blog all on its own – but it should entice them to learn more. You don’t need to say everything in it – but attempt to write something that is still in the mind of those who hear it long afterwards.
- Be Energetic but not Hyped – you convey more than just dry information when describing your blog – but you also convey what YOU feel about it. This is important – if you ‘pitch’ someone with language and a voice that is dry and uninspired you’re unlikely to convert anyone into a reader. Show people that you love what you’re doing, that you’re passionate and that you care about your topic. But don’t go too far and hype it up beyond what it is!
- Consider Using a Question – people are wired to answer and engage with questions. Ask them, even just rhetorical ones, in your pitch and you’ll hook people in.
- Be Ready to Expand Upon Your Pitch – at a recent conference I had someone come up and give me what seemed like an elevator pitch about their blog. It worked really well, they got me interested – so interested that I asked them to tell me more. The problem was that they didn’t really have much else to say about their blog. See an elevator pitch as a conversation opener – something designed to lead into further interaction with people. You don’t have to say it all in your initial pitch – but you should be ready to say more if people are interested.
These are just the thoughts that come to my mind on elevator pitches (what would you add?). Not everyone will be able to incorporate all of the above points but I hope that some of it will help you to develop yours.
My Elevator Pitch
I have a couple of elevator pitches my blog here at ProBlogger. One’s short (just 6 words) and one’s a little longer (a minute or so). I use one or the other of them depending upon the circumstances and opportunity to share.
My short one is very simple – ‘ProBlogger helps Bloggers Build Exceptional Blogs’. I’ve used others over the life of this blog (and continue to evolve it) but have settled on this one for the time being because it is so simple, to the point and clear.
The longer version expands upon this and shares some of the ways that the blog helps bloggers improve their blogs by talking through a few of the main topics I cover.
Write Your Elevator Pitch
Once you’ve got an elevator pitch for your blog write or print it out and put it somewhere near your computer so that as you blog you can be reminded of it. You might also like to start to incorporate it into your blog as a tagline or in your about page – or even to write a post about it on your blog to communicate to your readers what you’re on about (the appropriateness of writing it as a post will of course vary from blog to blog).
Once you’ve done that – feel free to share what you’ve come up with in comments below. I’m looking forward to reading yours.
Tomorrow on the 31 Days to Build a Better Blog Challenge – tomorrows task is a writing task that will have you writing a particular type of blog post to use on your blog in the next few days.
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Hi Darren!
Here is my elevator pitch:
Imagine what goes on in my head. Scary, huh? Don’t worry; I’m sure someone will pay for therapy for you. I have some of my best ideas, my most potent thoughts, sometime after dark while I’m lying there waiting for the sandman to visit. Most of it is stupid, but this give me a chance to get those thoughts out and “onto paper,” so to speak. Enjoy!
The pitch I use on my blog is this:
This blog provides tips and tricks so you can get organized and stay that way.
On my business card it’s this:
Nonjudgmental Help for the Overwhelmed
I still like both of them, but input is always welcome!
POTN Blog helps you modify your car.
The POTN Blog audience is anyone who wants to work on thier car to gain an improvement in the way it looks or performs. We use our industry insider contacts to get the hot products first. We create intrigue through pre-release spy shots & controversal points of view to stimulate comment.
People who love modifying cars trust us to delivery timely information that wil help them make their own choices when the time comes.
Excited to give a much needed kick-start to my my blog. Essentially it’s the ‘company blog’ for my printing website. The one-line elevator pitch I settled on is ‘Tips & tricks for small business people.’
Great start for 31 Day Challenge, Darren!
My elevator pitch:
The BigBlueBall community gives you the latest news and information on social media, served up straight. No BS, just what you need to know.
http://www.bigblueball.com — if you care.
I love this idea as the first challenge. Creating a tag line was somewhat mandatory with my WordPress blog as there was a blank line asking for one so the first elevator pitch I came up with was:
“A radical dreamer and full-time college student exploring ideals of life, psychology, and self improvement.”
I really like the simplicity of it and it gets straight to the point. :) Thanks to this post, I’ve been thinking of ways to expand on it if asked.
I’m glad to be a part of this challenge! (Though I’m a little late!)
I figure that to introduce my blog and tell you what it is first is exactly what I won’t be doing when trying to sell it, which is what the elevator pitch is for, so here is the meat of the comment, my pitch:
“Umwhatnow.com is your guide to personalizing World of Warcraft with macros, addons, and user interfaces. How to find, setup, use, and create your own WoW experience. No more “um…what now?” moments. Play. Your way.”
Thoughts?
Blog called “it’s a kids ministry revolution baby!”
Pitch”
rev-o-lu-tion: a complete, permanent, fundamental change
Kids Pastors need to have insight into the world that kids live in, how it shapes their worlds view, and to be seeking revelation form God about how to lead them into being life long followers of Jesus. Join me on the journey as I discover what that looks like!
My elevator pitch: “I help businesses create on online identity.”
The long version: “I help businesses create on online identity, using social media, SEO, and Web Marketing.
Hi Darren,
I really liked this first lesson. My elevator pitch is right here, next to me. I’ve thought about it often but tweaked my ideas a bit and finally put it down on paper today! I’ve had a tagline right from the start though:
Go explore. Experience. And be inspired.
Looking forward to lesson no.2. Haven’t received any e-mail yet though.
Hello,
I’m just starting a blog for my product (Smart Diary Suite), and I’m glad that this opportunity to learn about blogging came up.
I’ve come up with the following blog description, that is my pitch:
“Do you wish to know why some days are better than others? Do you need to keep track of things? SDS can do all that and more for you!”
Any comments are welcome! :)
Thanks,
Dennis
I help run a non-profit called ZeroTrash.. a community clean-up project dedicated to ridding streets of trash, reducing waste, supporting local business and fostering environmental responsibility.
http://zerotrash.wordpress.com/ourstory/
My new-and-improved “elevator pitch” for my blog (that is prominently displayed on it!) is: “helping real estate agents consistently attract only their perfect clients.”
Well I worked on this but did not comment yesterday. I think i have ADD. There are so many participants, I could not even make it through all the comments!! But I want to be accountable so thought I should post one more. I feel a bit blown away by the first challenge. it hits right at my blog’s weakness, no focus! I don’t have a business, but i do want some personal expression.
Thus far, my elevator pitch seems to be something like..My life as a work in progress? When I thought more on the subject, my longer pitch went something like this…hard-earned or -learned advice on living more and doing less, random musing on life as crazy busy working mom, with a little bit of entertainment on the side.
Gad, it still sounds all-over-the-place. Perhaps it is a narcissistic view of me in blog-format! Ack, well, this is just day 1…
WordPlay at Work is a blog about how to put the power of writing to work for your business.
any opinions on this for an economical satire blog…
The Gloomberg Report offers a satirical look at economic current events. Additionally, it has an educational side where you can learn about interviewing, personal finance, and hot deals. Learn. Laugh. Daily. It’s Bloomberg with spunk!
Thanks for the great information. Here is my pitch.
The Last Chiropractor is a consulting group dedicated to helping Chiropractors develop the practice of their dreams built on a foundation of Universal Principles and Chiropractic’s Philosophy of Life.
Wow, I have trouble coming up with a long elevator speech. I am a short and to the point kind of gal.
Tag line:
Real Estate information for every lifestyle
Elevator speech:
Timely real estate and other real estate related information you can use.
The Welcome Page on my blog is supposed to be my elevator speech – but it needs some editing. I don’t think 500+ words meets the “Keep it short” criteria. ;) It’s not so easy to edit your passion though!
Thanks Darren – I’m really looking forward to this Challenge!
Pitch line:
This is my public service effort to share information on what matters in Franklin, MA.
I decided to start an entire new blog for this adventure. I’ve been writing historical essays for over three years.
My tagline is History is Fun(damental) and my elevator pitch is stored on the About this Blog page.
Now all I need is a publisher and I will be all sest.
Hi
My blog is “Blinded with Science”, and my elevator pitch is “A reflexion on the impact of technology in our day to day lives and how it will shape our future.”
I’m considering adding a “serene” or other adjective to “reflexion” to express how I pretend to conduct that reflexion, but for some reason, I don’t like how it sounds.
Pablo
Darren, I have been waiting for this day for a long while. I am so glad it is here and I am so ever joyed to learn more and become great like you.
THANK YOU !!!
I would love to welcome all my class mates here to, Thee Angels Network. We know that spirit is not a religion but merely energy; let us give you a boost.
http://tashaharris.wordpress.com
http://www.theeangels.us/
Mine is: “My books and blog help people to turn their self-responsibility switch on.”
I run two blogs. I did the exercise for both. I write my tag line on the blog header.
The Tag line for my secondary blog is: Talking about women and social media.
Elevator pitch: I share blogging tips and how to use social media from a woman’s perspective
For my main blog, I highlights the main benefits in the tag line: fun, stylish and easy entertaining
Elevator pitch: I produce an ultimate guide for stress-free entertaining. Every day I share tips, finds and inspirations on how to make entertaining at home fun, stylish and easy.
Thank Darren for reminding us to share our answers.
This is fantastic – it will give me the focus I need to improve my blog, one task at a time. Thanks for taking the time. In the meantime, here is the elevator pitch for my blog:
Cooking with Kids for a better body, planet and community.
(I am not sure if that is too short – but this could be my super-brief version.)
I could also work on another one that gives more details. Mostly though, my blog focuses on how to bring kids into the kitchen to cook healthy food that is good for their bodies and the planet. It also includes lots of tips on how to use cooking as a means to perform community service and help others.
This was a great idea. Here’s mine, which I made using 15secondpitch.com : My name is Sonja Foust and I am a blogger specializing in reading, writing, and life in suburbia. My blog gives you the best of what I run across, from the newest gadgets to the coolest books. I’ve been blogging since 2000, so you’ll never have to worry if I’ll be back next week or not. Come check out what’s going on! Visit http://www.sonjafoust.com/blog for the latest.
This was a great start to the challenge, and we have already got a new tagline for our blog. I’m also gleaning as much info from the comments here as from the initial post!
My blog is Sex, Lies and Dating in the City and it has no other purpose than to provide recreational reading and enjoyment to its readers – that’s not the elevator pitch, just some context.
The tagline which has appeared on the blog since day 1 is:
“Real stories about dating, relationships and sex in New York City. Truth is more interesting than fiction.”
I guess that would serve well enough as the elevator pitch. “On Sex, Lies and Dating in the City I tell real stories about dating, relationships and sex in NYC. Truth is more interesting than fiction.”
SG
I think my elevator pitch to too wordy. Any suggestions on this – Different Trends is an online retailer of innovative, original clothing designs focused on the latest in street wear and underground trends. Drawing on the unique vision of skilled independent designers, Different Trends provides diverse, distinctive looks.
Thanks
My website is: http://www.goddessguidebook.com
Elevator speech:
Goddess Guidebook is your Guide for living a creative and sacred Goddess life.
And if the elevator ride went a bit longer:
I help women discover the Goddess inside themselves through e-courses, custom art and Goddess Guidance sessions.
Hurrah!
I signed up originally thinking that I would be using this for my personal blog. After finishing reading the book that I recently got, and this blog post, I have figured out that I will be using this to generate the new blog for my new business (that is just being created!)
Thanks so much for the input, and I look forward to seeing the rest of the information!
Okay here’s my elevator pitch. What do you think?
The Bookworm Blog is a blog where eager readers can get honest reviews of books as they are enjoyed by a mother of five who reads to escape the boring reality of her life, whenever she has a spare moment.
For a tagline, I’m thinking something like this: Where eager readers go to find their next great read.
Thanks to your earlier writings, I had something close to what I wanted, but this post helped me firm it up.
CrystalsQuest.com – Self Esteem for Success
I’m going to let it percolate a bit before I change it on the blog, though, because it feels a bit like I’m close but there’s one tweak left to make it perfect…
Great post!
Tagline: Create a career you can love and live with.
Pitch: My blog offers advice and resources on how to find, keep, and profit from work you love.
Count me in.
I’m taking the challenge (1 day late).
Here’s my pitch:
“It’s not just about the money. It’s about accomplishing your purpose in life through the Internet and WordPress blogs. We’re here to help you achieve online business success with guidance, step-by-step systems, and motivation…”
I’ve posted my first task on my elevator pitch at http://www.reallifepurpose.com/elevator-pitch/
Thanks for the great advice,
Greg
I have two blogs, and I found this much easier for my first blog than my second:
http://krissyscookingblog.blogspot.com
“Foodie adventures for two, on $70 a week.”
http://myrope.wordpress.com
“I turned 30, and decided push all my boundaries – rock-climbing, belly dance and latent creativity. Come and join in!”
I think this is much, much easier for professional blogs than personal blogs.
My tagline is pretty short and sweet:
Clowntowns.com –> Clown your friends
I also added a quick About Clowntowns page with a short pitch on what the blog is all about:
Clowntowns was created as a public forum for those of us who like to clown on our friends. Commenting on Facebook pictures gets old, not to mention, lacks the proper storytelling each true-to-form picture, video, or story deserves.
Might need a little work or call to action still…
I have created a “Wordle elevator pitch” and it is right here:
http://lunas994.blogspot.com/2009/04/my-elevator-pitch.html#links
If I had to put it into a sentence, I guess it would be something like this; “I am an EFL teacher, a lifelong learner, a creative writer and a Web 2.0 enthusiast. I blog because blogging makes me happy.”
I guess my elevator pitch could do with some improvement, but it is true – the main reason I blog is that blogging makes me happy.
Married with Luggage:http://www.marriedwithluggage.com/
Tagline: “Pare down, save up, and get out.”
Elevator Pitch: “Get a life! That’s right, you heard me. Stop existing and start LIVING. Get out of debt, surround yourself with people who support you, eliminate the junk and start designing the life of your dreams.”
A Traveler’s Library is a place to discuss books, and occasionally movies, that inspire and inform travel.
dsplog.com – Signal processing for communication, is an educational blog aimed at helping the reader understand the theory behind digital signal processing blocks used in digital communication transmitter and receiver. The theory is explained using classical text books as reference accompanied with simulation model using Matlab and/or Octave scripts.
Thanks,
Krishna
I have two blogs that are “related” if you will. Each of them have their own tag line that I’ll stretch out to a longer elevator pitch.
I’m on vacation this week and not trying to do too much IT
I am the manager of a community web portal which includes many things plus a blog. We are less than 2 weeks away from the launch of the all new portal which is taking nearly all of my time at the moment, but I would really like to commit to doing this course as well.
My elevator speech is pitched to the community and businesses of this region and is;
Albany GateWay is the web portal for the region where it’s easy to find who what where and when in Albany and the Great Southern. Are you on Albany GateWAy?
Purecognition is where Minds and Microchips Meet.
Humans made computers in the image of their mind, and computers became extensions of their minds. They then linked these computers together and made societies. These societies have manifested the web as we know it. Now, more and more these societies are searching or meaning. There is so much data that humans need to use meaning to make sense of it all. This will lead to the semantic web. The PureCognition blog shows this evolution in a unique and interesting way.
My blog is about funny stories from the future: each story is set in the future but have the same kinds of problems we have today.
I’ve been changing the tagline for my site many times…I’m still not sure what would be the best but here is my latest attempt: “The future ain’t what it used to be”
A funny look at the future…
Thank you for this, I feel I have been negleting a part of my blog for a whiel. I love my blog and don’t want it to become to “monetized”….
Frugalgreenmom is a blog to help you save money, spend money more wisely, and live happier on less.
Reminding individuals that there’s no joy like spreading joy!
“There’s no joy like spreading joy” is what I use as my tag line.
Also – “Giving what we can until we can give big.”
I’m a little bit late on this assignment but here is my elevator pitch:
NextGenerationChiropractor.com helps chiropractors build their practices through social media and the internet.
By the way, I’m looking forward to the rest of the series. Great idea lead by a great mentor!
Since reading this article I have tweaked my elevator pitch to:
Cougar Microbes: music journalism, dilettante photography.
I think it instantly conveys what you are going to find on the blog and displays some self-depreciating humour.
Thanks for this brilliant resource
Boaz