Welcome to Day #1 of the 31 Days to Build a Better Blog Challenge. As on each day of this project today I’d like to present you with two things:
- Some Teaching/Theory
- A Task to go away and Do
Teaching
Today’s task (outlined in full below) is to develop an Elevator Pitch for your Blog. Let me explain why.
What is an Elevator Pitch?
“An elevator pitch is an overview of an idea for a product, service, or project. The name reflects the fact that an elevator pitch can be delivered in the time span of an elevator ride (for example, thirty seconds or 100-150 words).” – Wikipedia
Many business and self improvement type courses teach students to develop an elevator pitch for their business (and even for themselves). The idea is to have something short and sharp that you can say about yourself when the opportunity arises instead of bumbling your way through explaining what you or your business does (and miss an opportunity).
The goal is both to communicate what you do and to get the person you’re communicating it to to want to know more.
Elevator Pitches for Bloggers
While the idea of an elevator pitch is usually something that start up entrepreneurs are encouraged to do when looking for investors – developing an elevator pitch for your blog is also a smart move also.
One of the most important reasons to do this exercise is that to develop an elevator pitch YOU as a blogger to have thought through and crystallised in your mind what your blog is about.
If you’re fuzzy on what your blog is about it’s unlikely than anyone else will have much of an idea either.
Knowing what your blog is about helps you in developing every aspect of it including:
- Writing Content
- Promotion and Finding Readers
- Search Engine Optimisation
- Networking with other Bloggers
- Branding
- Design…. the list can go on.
In fact almost every task that we’ll be doing in this next 31 days should flow from this task.
Other Reasons for Developing an Elevator Pitch
Of course coming up with an elevator pitch is not just for your own benefit. Once you’ve got one it is brilliant for communicating what your blog is about to readers (both the ones you already have and potential ones), other bloggers, potential partners, media/journalists, advertisers and even to friends and family members who might not get what you’re doing.
Once you’ve got your blogs elevator pitch there’s no limit to the places and situations that you can use it (either part of it or in its entirety). Here are a few that come to mind:
- Your blogs tag line – having a short, sharp and descriptive ‘tag line’ for your blog can be a powerful technique for quickly communicating to new readers to your blog what it is all about. Readers who don’t get a sense for what your blog is about are in danger of leaving quickly – so a tagline that is displayed prominently on your blog can be a great way to hook them in.
- Your about page – the about page of a blog (if you have one) is one of the most read pages of a blog by first time visitors. It is an ideal place to communicate what you’re about and to ‘sell’ to potential readers why they should subscribe and come back.
- Real Life Conversation – whether it be at a conference, in business interactions or just in everyday conversation, the topic of your blog is likely to come up from time to time and these interactions can be an ideal moment to pull out the elevator pitch to describe what your blog is about.
- Business Cards – I get a lot of business cards given to me at conferences and to be honest at the end of the day I can’t remember who gave me most of them. Adding an elevator pitch to a card can help trigger who you are and what you do in the mind of those you chat with at these busy types of events.
- Pitching to Media – One of the things I’ve noticed about many journalists is that they’re very busy people who are constantly being pitched with ideas for stories. Having a thought through and effective ‘pitch’ can help you get noticed and give a journalist a reason to listen to what you’ve got to say.
- Pitching to Other Bloggers – Similarly, I find that if I’m being ‘pitched’ to as a blogger that I take more notice if the person pitching to me gives me a brief insight into who they are and what they do.
- Email Signature – many people have links to their blogs in their emails, but a link can be somewhat meaningless on its own. Why not add your elevator pitch? Similarly signatures in forums can be a good place to have a short description of what you do to motivate people to check you out further.
- Social Media Profiles – the same thing goes for all those social media profiles that you have. Why not use them to not only point people to your blog but to give them a reason to go there!
Where else would you use an elevator pitch? I’m sure there are so many more times to pull them out! Feel free to share other places you’ll be using yours.
Your Task for Today
Take some time out today to develop an elevator pitch for your blog. If you’ve already got one take a few minutes to review and refine it.
How to Write an Elevator Pitch for Your Blog
I’m sure there has been much written on the topic online but here’s some starting points that I use when doing this type of thing.
- Solve a Problem or Need – I’m a big believer in developing blogs that fulfil real needs and solve problems that people have. The problem need not be a big one (like World Peace) but you should be attempting to create something that people need on some level. Communicate this in your elevator pitch.
- Define Your Audience – who is your blog for? Who are you attempting to attract? IF your blog is targeting a certain demographic or type of person (and it may or may not) – include this in your pitch. If your blog is for teens, don’t develop a pitch for grandparents – target the reader you want.
- Be Clear – don’t leave people second guessing what you mean or interpreting jargon – make your elevator pitch crystal clear.
- Keep it Short – People have limited attention spans and capacity to absorb lots of information. Get to the point, eliminate unnecessary words and make it punchy!
- Stand Out – be willing to use humour or powerful imagery to grab the attention of those that hear your elevator pitch.
- Be Intriguing – your elevator pitch is unlikely to ‘convert’ people to read your blog all on its own – but it should entice them to learn more. You don’t need to say everything in it – but attempt to write something that is still in the mind of those who hear it long afterwards.
- Be Energetic but not Hyped – you convey more than just dry information when describing your blog – but you also convey what YOU feel about it. This is important – if you ‘pitch’ someone with language and a voice that is dry and uninspired you’re unlikely to convert anyone into a reader. Show people that you love what you’re doing, that you’re passionate and that you care about your topic. But don’t go too far and hype it up beyond what it is!
- Consider Using a Question – people are wired to answer and engage with questions. Ask them, even just rhetorical ones, in your pitch and you’ll hook people in.
- Be Ready to Expand Upon Your Pitch – at a recent conference I had someone come up and give me what seemed like an elevator pitch about their blog. It worked really well, they got me interested – so interested that I asked them to tell me more. The problem was that they didn’t really have much else to say about their blog. See an elevator pitch as a conversation opener – something designed to lead into further interaction with people. You don’t have to say it all in your initial pitch – but you should be ready to say more if people are interested.
These are just the thoughts that come to my mind on elevator pitches (what would you add?). Not everyone will be able to incorporate all of the above points but I hope that some of it will help you to develop yours.
My Elevator Pitch
I have a couple of elevator pitches my blog here at ProBlogger. One’s short (just 6 words) and one’s a little longer (a minute or so). I use one or the other of them depending upon the circumstances and opportunity to share.
My short one is very simple – ‘ProBlogger helps Bloggers Build Exceptional Blogs’. I’ve used others over the life of this blog (and continue to evolve it) but have settled on this one for the time being because it is so simple, to the point and clear.
The longer version expands upon this and shares some of the ways that the blog helps bloggers improve their blogs by talking through a few of the main topics I cover.
Write Your Elevator Pitch
Once you’ve got an elevator pitch for your blog write or print it out and put it somewhere near your computer so that as you blog you can be reminded of it. You might also like to start to incorporate it into your blog as a tagline or in your about page – or even to write a post about it on your blog to communicate to your readers what you’re on about (the appropriateness of writing it as a post will of course vary from blog to blog).
Once you’ve done that – feel free to share what you’ve come up with in comments below. I’m looking forward to reading yours.
Tomorrow on the 31 Days to Build a Better Blog Challenge – tomorrows task is a writing task that will have you writing a particular type of blog post to use on your blog in the next few days.
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I went ahead and put mine as the subtitle to the blog itself.
I’m still somewhat up in the air on the full details of what I want to the blog to cover, so I’m sure it will see some growth as I continue to ponder.
It is focused towards a specific audience though, so as small as it is right now it still gets the general point across.
http://psynister.wordpress.com/
Thank for you for the great insight. I’ve written my E.P. and a short outline. Basically, I went thru your list and “answered the questions” which was a big help to me. Now I’m psyched about reading Day Two. Excellent so far!!
I think the idea of incorporating a question is simple and effective. Here’s what I’ve started with for my blog for mums http://mysquiggles.com
Do you currently work 24 hours a day, 7 days a week in the exhausting unpaid career that is mothering young children?! Welcome to My Squiggles on babies, toddlers and life as a mum… and finding meaning in the midst of it all!
I’m a day late getting started – for some reason I can’t get onto the aweber list. It never sends me a confirmation email. Argh!
But here’s the elevator pitch I wrote for our blog. I decided to publish put it right at the top of our About Us page:
http://www.doubleplus.com/about
Just the part in italics. The rest of the content was already there. I’m open to criticism :)
Thanks Darren for this “course”. It’s fun!
I have 2 blogs so one of my elevator pitch is Fat Loss Tips for the busy mom and dad and my 2nd one is Passive Income Ideas to stay out of the recession. I like the idea of adding this tagline to the bottom of each post since I use a signature photo as well.
SeaTown Sports
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“Seattle’s Reigning Sports Blog”
Here is our elevator pitch:
Fabulous After 40 is a style and fashion blog that helps women over 40 find inspiration and solutions for looking chic!
My quick pitch has been “Guiding the wayward on the journey home” I dunno if that is any good?? Now I want more than wayward souls to stop in. I feel it has spiritual encouragement for all.
This task made me rethink my rambling description on the home page. Now under description it says: “If you have lost Faith in yourself, your God, or are just plain lost, camp out here for a bit. Look up and see that a ray of hope is still beaming down on you.”
Thanks for this Darren. I’ve included Sean Wise’s video on developing an elevator pitch, taken from the Canadian TV series, Dragon’s Den. The pain statement for The Inspiration Room is our every day experience of advertising, design, and other creative work that fails to inspire. Our value proposition is the use of our site to influence, affect and involve creative communities in the development of a world standard for inspiration.
Thank you such much, I had to really think what to write down for this, but now that I have this statement, everything is so much clearer – I have a direction. Even in it’s first day, this challenge has improved my blog so much. What do you guys think of my pitch?
Habitation Intention will accomplish the following: this blog will serve as a archive, documenting humanity’s journey to becoming a space fairing species. We will inspire others to join in this movement and motivate those participating in the movement to keep moving forward. Lastly, we will teach our readers the information they need to become an active participant in this effort. Humanity is on the verge of achieving this long held dream and we want as many people as possible to participate in the achievement of this dream; we want everyone to have the Habitation Intention. We ask, on the dawn of this new age, do you have the Intention?
http://habitationintention.blogspot.com/2009/04/mission-statement.html
I am novice blogger without any niche topic on my blog “I, Me and MySelf”
My tagline is “Sharing my little INTERNET world!”
Havent ever thought much about this Tag line and Pitch concept.
I have missed the first day of 31DBBB but finally covered up by doing my tasks.
Thanks Darren.
My blog, Hometown News, is part of our website that designs Web 2.0 sites for local business owners. I know how important an elevator speech is when talking to potential clients face to face but never considered this idea for our blog. Here’s what I’ve written for our elevator pitch:
Hometown News offers ideas local business owners can use to write content for their blog, gives technical information about the WordPress platform, and provides other information that local business owners will find useful in promoting their business through blogging.
Eileen Likes To Eat helps Readers
~Finding Good Eats in Los Angeles and Around The Globe~
My blog is mostly about restaurant/food and I am based in Los Angeles. But I also write about traveling, animals, and info on good deals I find on the internet.
Here’s my tagline:
PCBA is Polk County’s first source for up to date building information.
comments?
Elevator pitch is pretty much a membership drive for the organization.
Right then, here’s mine..
Pool of Life
The story of Liverpool is as much about its people as its buildings or historic events. This is a forum for everyone who has been touched by the city to share their memories and learn more about Liverpool from its very beginning to the recent past.
I really think the *Keep It Short* point is improtant. When I’m online reading blogs, comments etc. I find myself skipping long articles…even the comments above.
Thanks for the lessons, Darren!
I just opened the link from your Day 1 email today, on Day 2. As english is not my mother language and I’m new in blogging the Elevator Pitch terms is still confusing for me, to be perfectly honnest, but I think I know what you mean.
My blog is http://www.beeamazing.com, and my tag line/short elevator pitch is “Learning from mistakes project”, which is used as a media to contemplate and share my thoughts,ideas,and feelings. But it also tells some travel stories of Bali, the beautiful island that is my life.
I will try to post this on my blog and hopefully I do the right thing because at some point just try to understand your Day 1 post here made me frustrated.It’s just a language problem,that’s all.
Thanks,Darren!!
Here it goes mine elevator pitch:
Ikariam Portugal is a blog which helps you building your huge empire on your Ikariam account. Check it out, it has many tips that may help your ranking position!
Blog Name: Bible Money Matters
Subject: Personal Finance
Tagline: Finances transformed by faith.
Short pitch: Bible Money Matters, a personal finance blog with daily articles to help you get out of debt, save, give and prosper.
My tagline is –> blog skills, tricks and skills for beginners which is tell my readers directly what my blog is about..
Can I write about elevator pitch in my blog since in Malaysia, most of them didn’t know about elevator pitch
Thanks for a great idea. You’ve motivated me to re-invent ny tag line and expand it into an elevator pitch. I’ll not bore you with the full pitch but my new tag line is: “GrampaSaidSo – Perspectives on both ends of the rainbow – growing up and growing older!”
Thanks for a great idea. You’ve motivated me to re-invent my tag line and expand it into an elevator pitch. I’ll not bore you with the full pitch but my new tag line is:
“GrampaSaidSo – perspectives on both ends of the rainbow – growing up and growing older!”
Oops… we are also going to try to apply your advice to our website and copywriting, so that last comment about our biz was probably off-topic for here. Here are our blog “elevator speeches:”
ShopWorthy – A Blog About Online Shopping!
“ShopWorthy” is about shopping, especially online shopping. We provide access to great shopping deals, share other cool blogs and websites, provide online shopping tips, share news about new products and websites, offer value through articles about gift ideas, and generally pontificate our deep thoughts about the art and science of online shopping.
DreamWorthy Friends
“DreamWorthy Friends – Noteworthy Networkers“ is a forum designed to showcase and spotlight networking contacts and worthy business friends.
Once we write about someone, they have the freedom to write about any of their noteworthy networking contacts, creating a “Pay It Forward” viral networking vehicle, where networking contacts can showcase their deserving associates and help each other.
Hey I got there in the end here is my elevator pitch – now I just need to print it out and go and stand in the elevator and see if it works!
http://rockangel.co.uk/?page_id=1181
Definitely helps consolidate my blog’s goals… so here’s my assignment for the day:
Short:
The Alternating Current is a Resource for People with Too Many Passions.
Longer:
The Alternating Current aims to help people who can’t seem to decide on one career or one area of focus to the exclusion of everything else. Instead of pigeonholing themselves, “Scanners,” “Eclectics” or “Renaissance Souls” need ways to incorporate all of who they are in their everyday lives. So the Alternating Current offers tips, helpful tools, books and websites and other resources to help eclectics design a life that works for them.
Great for day 1 — It actually motivated me to redo my entire “About” page — I think the results are positive.
Here is what I developed for my quick pitch:
The View from the Dugout isn’t the next ESPN; it’s more like the Discovery Channel of baseball, focusing on unique, interesting, and insightful stories.
Thanks, Darren.
– Jeff
I joined the challenge because I had been feeling disconnected from my blog. I didn’t realize you were going to give me a swift kick to the solar plexus right off the bat by essentially exposing what my problem was.
This is why I started reading you and why I will never stop.
I blogged about the blog identity crisis that ensured as a result of the day one homework: http://omgomgomfg.com/2009/04/07/who-are-you/
Pitch: My blog is a reflection on the web—the people in it, the things we’re doing, the customs we’re adopting, and the things we’re leaving behind as we venture forth into this uncharted territory of trial-and-error, where more and more, the digital is colliding with the analog.
Glad to know, I’m doing something right.
The elevator pitches were the first thing I implemented when I started http://www.idrawdigital.com
I have two statements, and then a brief blurb about what the site is all about.
The official title for my site is:
“idrawdigital – Your Guide Through the World of Illustration.”
I have a brief tagline that reads:
“Illustration Resources from around the Web”
and then my complete statement about the site in the ‘about’ section of the site.
“idrawdigital is an online illustration resource providing links to tutorials, techniques, inspiration, reviews and other news related to digital art and illustration.”
I hope its concise enough to convey what it is I’m blogging about.
Prayerthegate.com using eight types of prayer for your jouney to the spiritual realm.
My (soon to be EnrichedLivingblog) elevator speech:
“My blog offers encouraging ideas that help people add enrichment and enjoyment to their daily life and livelihood.”
Weareawesome.net
An entertaining overview of life for two hip cats raising two future hip cats.
Darren: this exercise was incredibly helpful. This is what I came up with.
Short oneliner: A brutally honest and humorous look at the ups and downs of marriage, told through the eyes of a former divorce daydreamer.
Extended pitch: It’s a cheap yet effective antidote for your anger, discontent, disillusionment, and nearly every other crummy feeling you’ve ever had. I help you not only feel self-righteously normal, but also find the courage to change for the better.
Extended even more: I am a recovering type A workaholic who has struggled with and overcome perfectionism, shyness, depression, career disillusionment, and marital disharmony. I’ve gone from wishing my husband would just drop dead already to renewing my wedding vows. I’ve learned how to be happy the hard way, so you can learn the easy way. Here I share my life lessons with you—for free.
Testimonial (I added this because I think it’s a nice idea and maybe other bloggers might want to use something like it on their land pages):
“Project: Happily Ever After is like a wrinkle cream for a tighter, firmer marriage. It gives people something they can try right away–with results after just two applications.” —Monica, a regular reader
My elevator pitch is built into my blog name, Expert Skills for Real Estate Agents and it has been pretty effective so far.
Like you said, I think I want to have few on hand to use for different situations.
Darren,
I was a little struck with this elevator pitch and it triggered my mind to think very deeply. The result was a new about-page that describes through the point (I guess) what my blog is all about.
Thank you. Heading to the ‘list post thing’ now.
Bless you!
Mario
Only those with high levels of stamina and low phobia levels would want to get on this elevator with me. It stops at every floor. And gets stuck between floors. Does it go all the way to the top?
Enjoying the challenge, Darren!
Here goes:
Free From Broke – Personal Finance Blog for Regular Folks
Sue Katz: Consenting Adult
A wordsmith and rebel with a muscular take on sex, culture and politics.
Hi Darren,
As it turns out, I spent the weekend re-working my tag line. What do you think:
Light Rail Blogger
“Part light rail experience, part carfree experiment.”
The longer version:
“I write a blog about on the new light rail system here in Phoenix, and how it’s helped me to go carfree in an effort to do my part to help clear the air we breath and create a more livabale, walkable community.”
Thanks Darren
I am a bit late cause I had problems with my internet connection last night.
Here is my elevator pitch.
More Birds for More Birders through use of Social Media and Technology
More Birds – is the business mantra of my bird tour company Kolibri Expeditions.
My blog is both to let the readers learn about More Birds as well as improving the birding experience and birding skills through technology and social media such as blogging, Facebook, Twitter, online-databases, forums and online picture sharing.
It covers aspects of:
• Networking for birders
• Digital photography
• Conservation of threatened birds
• How to become a birdwatcher and natureblogger
• Birding with Kids
• Listing
• Rare birds and conservation
• Birding tours
Published on my blog:
http://www.kolibriexpeditions.com/birdingperu/blog/index.php/more-birds-for-more-birders/
I’m currently working on a blog/sire that will launch later this month. So, while I don’t have anything to show at the moment, I’m taking this all in!
The site I’m launching is Green-Parents.com (not currently live) and is a green-living community for those on the journey to living responsibly.
Can’t wait for more lessons!!
My current blog is basically of a personal nature, so my elevator pitch is on the more casual side of things, “Thoughts from your typical 30something girl.”
But my yet to be established blog is going to focus on weddings – the history, traditions, ideas, etc.. “Tying up your wedding plans, one knot at a time…” It’s in the working stage, but I think it could be a good one!
Spent some time working on my elevator spiel, however, realized I hadn’t defined the demographics, psychographics, and socialgraphics first.
Thanks for this elevator pitch. I took the subtitle in my blogger header and brought it out of sleep mode. I changed it from, The Real Hollywood, People and Places that make Hollywood and California, to this; The Real Hollywood, Celebrity News, Trivia and Interviews from Los Angeles, California.
Here’s my tagline:
Blast!
Uncovering social ineptitude in all its’ disguises.
Here’s my elevator pitch:
Being a highly sensitive person means I pick up on things most people miss. I detail my daily thoughts on what I know people are thinking but will not admit and how others can do the same.
I think I already have a pretty clear mission for my blog:
Eating Consciously advocates, inspires, and encourages others to adopt an easy, fun, delicious, vegan lifestyle that is always a choice, never a chore.
Eating Consciously goes beyond my blog, including youtube videos, a podcast, tweets, cooking classes, writings, and local events such as Vegan Drinks Philly.
My blog, WordVessel, chronicles my journey into the world of writing inspirational fiction. It includes book reviews, author interviews, book giveaways, posts on the craft of writing, and devotional posts.
Thanks a lot for this incredible opportunity!
Thanks for this motivation. The tagline and elevator pitch have been on my to-do list for too long now. For my parenting advice and tips blog, I’m going with the tagline:
raising smarter parents and happier kids
Some think I should nix the “raising” part, but I kinda like it. In many ways, I do feel like I am raising or bringing parents up to speed.
My Blog: RoadMappMarketing.com
Tag line: Your Guide to Network + Attraction Marketing $olutions
Elevator Pitch: I guide home-based entrepreneurs in using Attraction Marketing techniques to build their business or MLM online.
This assignment has really helped me focus things a bit. Now, I think I’m going to update my Twitter profile with a version of the Elevator Pitch.
Thanks, Darren. Now off to the next assignment!
-Ben
This was a wonderful first start. It made me focus on writing in one sentence what I wanted my blog design to convey. My blog highlights my book reviews and other literary and publishing topics. Here’s what I’ve come up with.
Keeping a tidy home for the insatiably literate
I’ve added it to my About page, my Twitter account (@lithousewife), my Facebook profile, and to my email signatures. After sitting with it for a little while to be sure that it sticks with me, I’m going to request it be added to my blog’s homepage and my business cards. I’m also going to work on expanding upon it for conversations.
Thanks for the great lesson, Darren! This is going to be great!