Welcome to Day #1 of the 31 Days to Build a Better Blog Challenge. As on each day of this project today I’d like to present you with two things:
- Some Teaching/Theory
- A Task to go away and Do
Teaching
Today’s task (outlined in full below) is to develop an Elevator Pitch for your Blog. Let me explain why.
What is an Elevator Pitch?
“An elevator pitch is an overview of an idea for a product, service, or project. The name reflects the fact that an elevator pitch can be delivered in the time span of an elevator ride (for example, thirty seconds or 100-150 words).” – Wikipedia
Many business and self improvement type courses teach students to develop an elevator pitch for their business (and even for themselves). The idea is to have something short and sharp that you can say about yourself when the opportunity arises instead of bumbling your way through explaining what you or your business does (and miss an opportunity).
The goal is both to communicate what you do and to get the person you’re communicating it to to want to know more.
Elevator Pitches for Bloggers
While the idea of an elevator pitch is usually something that start up entrepreneurs are encouraged to do when looking for investors – developing an elevator pitch for your blog is also a smart move also.
One of the most important reasons to do this exercise is that to develop an elevator pitch YOU as a blogger to have thought through and crystallised in your mind what your blog is about.
If you’re fuzzy on what your blog is about it’s unlikely than anyone else will have much of an idea either.
Knowing what your blog is about helps you in developing every aspect of it including:
- Writing Content
- Promotion and Finding Readers
- Search Engine Optimisation
- Networking with other Bloggers
- Branding
- Design…. the list can go on.
In fact almost every task that we’ll be doing in this next 31 days should flow from this task.
Other Reasons for Developing an Elevator Pitch
Of course coming up with an elevator pitch is not just for your own benefit. Once you’ve got one it is brilliant for communicating what your blog is about to readers (both the ones you already have and potential ones), other bloggers, potential partners, media/journalists, advertisers and even to friends and family members who might not get what you’re doing.
Once you’ve got your blogs elevator pitch there’s no limit to the places and situations that you can use it (either part of it or in its entirety). Here are a few that come to mind:
- Your blogs tag line – having a short, sharp and descriptive ‘tag line’ for your blog can be a powerful technique for quickly communicating to new readers to your blog what it is all about. Readers who don’t get a sense for what your blog is about are in danger of leaving quickly – so a tagline that is displayed prominently on your blog can be a great way to hook them in.
- Your about page – the about page of a blog (if you have one) is one of the most read pages of a blog by first time visitors. It is an ideal place to communicate what you’re about and to ‘sell’ to potential readers why they should subscribe and come back.
- Real Life Conversation – whether it be at a conference, in business interactions or just in everyday conversation, the topic of your blog is likely to come up from time to time and these interactions can be an ideal moment to pull out the elevator pitch to describe what your blog is about.
- Business Cards – I get a lot of business cards given to me at conferences and to be honest at the end of the day I can’t remember who gave me most of them. Adding an elevator pitch to a card can help trigger who you are and what you do in the mind of those you chat with at these busy types of events.
- Pitching to Media – One of the things I’ve noticed about many journalists is that they’re very busy people who are constantly being pitched with ideas for stories. Having a thought through and effective ‘pitch’ can help you get noticed and give a journalist a reason to listen to what you’ve got to say.
- Pitching to Other Bloggers – Similarly, I find that if I’m being ‘pitched’ to as a blogger that I take more notice if the person pitching to me gives me a brief insight into who they are and what they do.
- Email Signature – many people have links to their blogs in their emails, but a link can be somewhat meaningless on its own. Why not add your elevator pitch? Similarly signatures in forums can be a good place to have a short description of what you do to motivate people to check you out further.
- Social Media Profiles – the same thing goes for all those social media profiles that you have. Why not use them to not only point people to your blog but to give them a reason to go there!
Where else would you use an elevator pitch? I’m sure there are so many more times to pull them out! Feel free to share other places you’ll be using yours.
Your Task for Today
Take some time out today to develop an elevator pitch for your blog. If you’ve already got one take a few minutes to review and refine it.
How to Write an Elevator Pitch for Your Blog
I’m sure there has been much written on the topic online but here’s some starting points that I use when doing this type of thing.
- Solve a Problem or Need – I’m a big believer in developing blogs that fulfil real needs and solve problems that people have. The problem need not be a big one (like World Peace) but you should be attempting to create something that people need on some level. Communicate this in your elevator pitch.
- Define Your Audience – who is your blog for? Who are you attempting to attract? IF your blog is targeting a certain demographic or type of person (and it may or may not) – include this in your pitch. If your blog is for teens, don’t develop a pitch for grandparents – target the reader you want.
- Be Clear – don’t leave people second guessing what you mean or interpreting jargon – make your elevator pitch crystal clear.
- Keep it Short – People have limited attention spans and capacity to absorb lots of information. Get to the point, eliminate unnecessary words and make it punchy!
- Stand Out – be willing to use humour or powerful imagery to grab the attention of those that hear your elevator pitch.
- Be Intriguing – your elevator pitch is unlikely to ‘convert’ people to read your blog all on its own – but it should entice them to learn more. You don’t need to say everything in it – but attempt to write something that is still in the mind of those who hear it long afterwards.
- Be Energetic but not Hyped – you convey more than just dry information when describing your blog – but you also convey what YOU feel about it. This is important – if you ‘pitch’ someone with language and a voice that is dry and uninspired you’re unlikely to convert anyone into a reader. Show people that you love what you’re doing, that you’re passionate and that you care about your topic. But don’t go too far and hype it up beyond what it is!
- Consider Using a Question – people are wired to answer and engage with questions. Ask them, even just rhetorical ones, in your pitch and you’ll hook people in.
- Be Ready to Expand Upon Your Pitch – at a recent conference I had someone come up and give me what seemed like an elevator pitch about their blog. It worked really well, they got me interested – so interested that I asked them to tell me more. The problem was that they didn’t really have much else to say about their blog. See an elevator pitch as a conversation opener – something designed to lead into further interaction with people. You don’t have to say it all in your initial pitch – but you should be ready to say more if people are interested.
These are just the thoughts that come to my mind on elevator pitches (what would you add?). Not everyone will be able to incorporate all of the above points but I hope that some of it will help you to develop yours.
My Elevator Pitch
I have a couple of elevator pitches my blog here at ProBlogger. One’s short (just 6 words) and one’s a little longer (a minute or so). I use one or the other of them depending upon the circumstances and opportunity to share.
My short one is very simple – ‘ProBlogger helps Bloggers Build Exceptional Blogs’. I’ve used others over the life of this blog (and continue to evolve it) but have settled on this one for the time being because it is so simple, to the point and clear.
The longer version expands upon this and shares some of the ways that the blog helps bloggers improve their blogs by talking through a few of the main topics I cover.
Write Your Elevator Pitch
Once you’ve got an elevator pitch for your blog write or print it out and put it somewhere near your computer so that as you blog you can be reminded of it. You might also like to start to incorporate it into your blog as a tagline or in your about page – or even to write a post about it on your blog to communicate to your readers what you’re on about (the appropriateness of writing it as a post will of course vary from blog to blog).
Once you’ve done that – feel free to share what you’ve come up with in comments below. I’m looking forward to reading yours.
Tomorrow on the 31 Days to Build a Better Blog Challenge – tomorrows task is a writing task that will have you writing a particular type of blog post to use on your blog in the next few days.
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What a great program! I have a brand new blog with almost no readers. I am so curious to see how participating in this program will impact blog traffic. Any traffic would be great at this point!!
Here is my blog’s elevator pitch:
A fun blog about all things woman — dieting, baking and fashion. Oh, and we are going to talk lots about Stampin Up! card making too!
Darren, Thanks for getting this series started. I am really looking forward to learning.
This is something I am going to work on. I don’t have a tag line or an elevator pitch so I am going to give it some thought and then add it to my homepage and about page.
I’ve created my elevator pitch. It was harder than I thought.
Below is the link.
http://aleasemichelle.typepad.com/my_weblog/2009/04/an-elevator-pitch-for-your-business.html
Thanks for a great start. Writing this wasn’t difficult, but I struggle with whether/how far to stray from the pitch in my posts, because just book reviews probably won’t attract a big enough audience (so I tend to mix in crafts and parenting articles to mingle more with other “mommy” bloggers).
My pitch:
Chronicle of an Infant Bibliophile is a blog that reviews children’s books and includes the perspective of a (now) 16 month-old reader in every review. The concept of the blog is to help parents to select books for their children that the children will love, rather than books that just receive accolades from adult critics.
Hi Darren,
Great start for the 31 days. Looking forward to posts to come. Here’s mine:
Blog: Brand Ignition
Tagline: Kick start a new brand. Jump start an old one.
Pitch: Tips, thoughts and ideas that help small and medium businesses invigorate their brands, based on my two decades of global branding experience.
Cheers,
Gareth
Phew…! It took me a while to rethink the tagline for GoodlifeZen.com
Here it is:
“Practical Inspiration that Helps you Reach for the Stars.”
At first I hit on this:
“No-fluff Inspiration that Helps you Reach for the Stars”
I had my doubts about starting with a negative, though.
What do you think, fellow bloggers?
cheers
Mary
Hi, mine is “A blog about everything that influences a baby’s genes during pregnancy” longer version would include a short description of the epigenome, (soon after conception a baby switches genes on or off in different cells according to signals received from his environment, this process called the mapping of the epigenome).
Excellent start to the challenge. I just started to take my website to blog format, and will be taking it to my own server once I have all the articles moved over.
I have sadly negleted this website for the past year or so, but it has never changed focused and my tag line for it has always been the same: Equestrian Days ~ From Your First Horse to Your First Foal.
My “elevator” intro to the site is: a website for first time or novice horse owners with articles, and tips on all aspects of horse ownership.
In honor of this website, I also run Cloud 9 Ranch Blog which tells of stories around the ranch, including raising horses, health issues, trail rides, and life on the ranch in general. No real tag line for this site yet, other then “Demanding the best in life”. http://cloud9ranch-tn.com/blog/
I am an Innovative Entrepreneur, Web Media Educator, Strategist & Consultant. I love to help, listen & teach. I work with entrepreneurs and indie businesses to develop and maintain their internet presence. I have a long history in business development, web startups, website development, design and education.
Some ideas I have for a tag line or elevator pitch:
“helping you make a home on the web where everyone wants to visit”
“revealing the wizards from behind the curtain”
“making a brand out of You”
“I teach people how to be found on the internet”
“teaching businesses how to spin a better web”
“growing people on the web since 1998”
any and all comments or thoughts are welcome,
all the best,
Jayson
Hi,
I’m lauching my book in the next 40 days. Wired to the max right now! By the way, I love this blog. The timing is good for me. Some of you all posted some really stunning elevator pitches.
My site is http://www.breakthepovertycurse.com
My elevator pitch is: My book is about helping people understand the spiritual dimension of poverty and how to unlock their prosperity.
I’m on twitter at vsberkeley. Looking for tweets who share the same interest.
Cheers,
Vaughn
ps. looking forward to day 2 of this blog
This was actually the first thing I did for my blog, before even writing any content, but I didn’t really have a name for it. I just thought I needed something short and snappy to sum up the site:
“Guitar articles, lessons, news, reviews and interviews. Everything about being a guitar hero except for the hair care tips. By Peter Hodgson.”
Depending on where the pitch is going, I add a little mention of the guitar magazines I write for.
Day 1 Task completed, located at the site above.
Kind Regards,
Scott Myers
Hello Darren!!! thanks for this challenge and wake up call. My tagline is “Bluegrass Music and Banjo Therapy” my first cut at the “elevator speech” from today’s lesson is :
“From The Desk of Allen Dresser” is about life-long creativity. It is inspired by those who keep the creative fires in their lives burning, no matter what the age. This blog has a focus on music, especially acoustic music and specifically bluegrass. Why bluegrass? The BANJO ! Of course! The banjo is the loudest, fastest most thrilling of the fretted string instruments and guaranteed to raise a smile whenever its raucous, ringing twang is invoked. So, if you have not acquired a taste for the 5-string, get yourself some quality bluegrass music on your favorite device and dig in.
Great start to this challenge. Are they going to continue to get harder? Cause this one took me awhile! Let me know what all of you think!
http://derekmcclain.com/2009/04/06/my-blogs-elevator-pitch/
My tagline or “elevator pitch” is “A girl’s perspective in games and anime”. I think it’s simple, but I don’t know if it’s too simple that it’s dry. However, I do have an about page (labeled, “The Legend of Ani Long and Star Haven”), which explains the tagline. It’s a little long, but it helps explain the tagline (as well as what to expect in my blog).
Thanks for the tips – they’re great.
I also realised that when you’re “writing” your elevator pitch its actually important to also “say” it out aloud.
Sitting here at home (by myself), my written word seems to be clear, but when I actually meet a human (especially at a networking event), I’m quite often stuck and more than a bit “stumbly” when it comes to what my blog is about.
Thanks again. Looking forward to more.
My elevator pitch for our blog would be something like this:
GossipSecretaries is the online resource for secretaries and administrative assistants.
A virtual office where secretaries and admin. assistants receive tips and strategies for professional development, and a place to share their successes, frustrations, and real life experiences with others.
And I guess my tagline is my header…
Chronicle of an Infant Bibliophile: Reviews of a baby bookworm.
StuffCooksWant…Your best online resource for the newest, coolest kitchen gadgets and more.
My blog is called VitaminCM.com
My new tagline is: Technology to Make Your Mind Grow
My new elevator pitch is:
VitaminCM.com’s goal is to help people get more from their technology. I want to help and inspire people to do more fun and useful things with computers, the internet, and gadgets. This help is provided via detailed written and video tutorials along with News, Reviews, and Surveys.
Still working on it.
Great start to the 31 days! Here’s my elevator pitch…
Exploring food sensitivities – the symptoms and the solutions while providing delicious gluten-free, dairy-free, sugar-free, and soy-free recipes.
Here it goes…
Are you tired of being a starving artist and unpaid writer? Have you been given so much advice that you don’t know where to start? Follow along with me as I use trial and error (and lots of caffeine) to reach my artistic goals. Learn about self-publishing, book marketing ideas, art for sale sites, social networking, and more!
Become a z-list celebrity like me!
I’m really enjoying reading everyone’s pitches. Here’s mine:
Everyday Goddess is my personal blog where I write about all the things I’m passionate about: Television, Reading, Cooking… I’m an aspiring director living the dream in Los Angeles, so I write a lot about that, too.
It’s all about Life and Love in the La La.
I have quite a vacation this month but I know I am going to come back to a lot of info to work with.
Been working on it all.
Tag: Bringing Creativity to Life.
Pitch: Nuwomb Creative helps to provide a digital womb of creativity to inspire, motivate and touch artist’s, designers, and photographers alike.
I find it short and sweet and it’s better than the jargon I have up right now. I would plan on expanding into more detail in an about page.
Daily Shot Of Coffee is your source for everything coffee: coffee reviews, coffee shop reviews and much more. It’s written by the average joe for the coffee lover in us all.
I am so excited about this project. Here is the new elevator pitch for my site:
Tagline: The Art of Blogging | Technically, Beautifully, Beneficially | Kikolani
Description: Kikolani is about the art of blogging – the technical aspects with blogging and social networking tips, the beauty with photography and poetry, and the benefits for writers and readers.
~ Kristi
@John Felkins – I tried to send you an e-mail about your pitch and website, using the EM address on your site’s contact page, but the message was returned as invalid. I know we haven’t covered “contact me” pages in this assignment yet, but you might want to get a head start.
thanks! i think i need to change my tagline–just to real spell out what my blog is about–thanks!
Here’s what I’ve cooked up:
Tagline: Technological Conversations
Description: Technology reviews, critiques, & resources surrounding web technology, new media, social networks, and mobile platforms.
Cool! This will help a lot.
I’m starting a new blog and 31DBBB will help me a lot in setting this up. Thanks Darren.
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http://raisingfilipinoboys.com
Towards a Godly, manly and entrepreneurial generation of Filipino men.
MCMM is a group blog for moms parenting teenagers, SpED teens, and young adults.
Darren,
Great start; I’m looking forward to the next 30 days. My blog’s name/tagline is:
Search Matters
Where Search Begins for Agencies
It is for advertising, PR and interactive agencies who want to learn about search marketing.
Obviously you are the king of blogging with incredible traffic already. But in an effort to give a little back, here’s an SEO tip for you–and your readers. Embed your blog’s URL in the image (like you did with the headline) and include your keywords in the title of the image. This way, it will get picked up in image searches and if/when the photo is used elsewhere by someone else, the image will have your blog’s URL in it.
Thanks.
Katy Barrilleaux
Search Matters
I’m so glad I signed up for this blog challenge! I wrote this assignment and turned it into my About Me section on my blog. Here’s what I wrote with your advice for my music blog, You Sing, I Write:
Follow my adventures touring with bands, traveling to music festivals and uncovering the inside scoop of what it’s like being an up-and-coming band in this crazy, constantly changing music business. A must read for every music fan who has ever wondered what really goes on backstage and on the road with a touring musician. What do YOU want to know? Contact me!
My blog – Jetwhine.com – is an aviation blog of “buzz and bold opinion,” that gives me quite a bit of latitude in what I write.
In addition to the great ideas Darren’s shared here, we just developed a cartoon-like button about 2 1/2 in diameter with a illustration of a happy jet plane that explains our blog from a reader’s perspective.
In life, Whiners are obnoxious. At Jetwhine, our readers think it’s cool. So the button says, “I’m a Whiner … Jetwhine.com”
Wish I could figure out a way to share the artwork here. We’re pretty proud right now.
Hi Darren,
Here is what I have to say about my blog
TIPS & TRICKS ON GMAT,GRE,CAT
All details you need to know about preparing for GMAT,GRE,CAT and other competitive exams with falsh cards and free email course.
http://www.catdumps.blogspot.com
Thanks.
Excellent Darren.
you are indeed a crazy brilliant blogger. i have just started my blog at http://www.Inspiero.com. It’s in Bahasa Indonesia.
What you have written here is excellent for me as i run into the future of making my blog a reference for other beginners in blogshpere.
thanks darren
keep up good workd
So Fawned is my blog title & the subtitle has always been “My life. My inspirations. My loves.”
It’s a somewhat person/parenting/family etc. blog, with hints of design & art focused content.
“A Canadian mother, blogging about life, inspirations & loves.”
Can something such as a personal blog use a pitch like this?
Excellent first day post and assignment. Having a good elevator pitch is key to any endeavor. I look forward to the rest of the course. Thanks.
I am going to use your comment system to help me keep up with my home work.
My pitch for http://Newmacuser.com is… I am trying to help new and old mac users to be ale to get the most out of the mac in front of them. I like trying to give tips to users who might otherwise not know about them.
SimpleEcoLife is the one stop to make on the web to learn how to be a little greener, a little more frugal, and how to simplify life a bit. It’s a community of friends helping each other grow.
Here it goes:
I write about sports, providing professional commentary in an unprofessional capacity. I keep it fun and keep people thinking.
Never thought to create an “Elevator Pitch” before, it really does help you put your blog into perspective. I look forward to the next 30 days.
My pitch:
SuburbanDollar provides a layman’s view on personal finance from the viewpoint of someone who doesn’t know it all. I provide my experiences and reviews of what I learn as move towards a more complete understanding of investing and finances.
I use the tag line “Homeschooling for the rest of us”.
I really need to work on an elevator pitch, so this is a great assignment for me. I’m going to take my description that I use for some ad sites and tweak it/change it to create my elevator pitch. My description as it stands is:
Heathen Homeschoolers is a blog written by a mom who educates her children from a secular point of view. Heathen Mom blogs about education resources, homeschooling topics, family adventures and more.
Dr Fitness and the Fat Guy Radio Show Blog
Elevator Pitch is Making Healthy Living Fun For Everyone
thank you darren,
this is great timing as i am a new blogger and want to get everything “just right”… so here’s hoping… and here’s to getting me thinking..
yes, i would agree that the my blog didn’t have any Elevator Pitch content,
my blog take from very personal back to crazy advertising which i earned nothing at the end of the day.
i now take my blog back to what it is, meaning i learned from my experiences, reader need to feel something about what you write,
for me blog is still something real and about life.
thank for this first day tip, i will think about creating one Elevator Pitch for my blog ;-)
Thanks for helping all of us new bloggers along the way.
Here is my elevator pitch for ProMapTraveler.com
ProMapTraveler provides both new and experienced travelers practical and useful hints, facts and ideas for safe and fun inland and coastal travel all around the globe.
My elevator pitch is: Commentary on works in progress and creativity.
It is a very interesting post; it made me think about the mission statement that is build into a Drupal site.
I guess this the mission statement is the first think people see in your site and it helps them determine if they got to the right place or not.
IMHO, Drupal site statement really encapsulates this essence of elevator pitch.
Anyway, my site-statement/elevator-pitch has changed because of this post and will be:
Spacebug – “Keeping software simple, open and pragmatic”
New phrase and new understanding
Thank you for both.