This is a guest post by Stefanie Flaxman of Revision Fairy® Small Business Proofreading Services
Writing mistakes happen.
Unfortunately for you and your readers, writing mistakes are like speed bumps on the blog post open highway. They slow down the reader and remove her from your world—the created reality that you share through your text.
Since you only have a few seconds to impress new readers, it’s critical to make all facets of your content flawless. If your writing confuses readers or hinders their experience because of a glaring error, you’ve failed.
Here are 21 common writing mistakes that turn off new readers. Eliminate them to demonstrate that you are an authority on your subject and get new subscribers.
1. You have no proverbial welcome mat
Display your personality on your Home, About, and Contact pages to attract and retain readers. Avoid generic descriptions.
Your content is hardly the only item on a reader’s to-do list. Immediately entice viewers and offer them something of value if they stay.
Let’s use ProBlogger as an example. Darren has a brief bio at the bottom of every page on his site, as well as a current video on the Home page. New readers quickly know the person behind ProBlogger.
Darren looks happy in his bio photograph because he makes money blogging. He also wears glasses. Perhaps a new reader wears glasses and likes that he and Darren have something in common. The bespectacled reader decides to read Darren’s blog instead of another blog advice site. (You get the point.)
Inviting tag lines and snazzy logos can also work well. What makes you different from the other bloggers in your niche?
2. Your posts look like Wikipedia articles
Content can reveal your individuality and remain professional. Don’t mindlessly spit out facts.
3. You don’t answer “W? W? W? W? W? H?”
Give your readers a complete story that they’ll want to share.
Answer “Who? What? When? Why? Where? How?” in your content.
The art of effective blogging strikes a balance between traditional journalism concepts and the casual, interactive tone that is characteristic of new media.
4. Your posts don’t include images
People like visuals. They go to the movies, watch television, and look at art in museums. Photos complement your text and improve a reader’s experience.
Think 360 degrees of SEO. Use the main keyword that you’re promoting in your post for the name of a photo file and its alt text (title tag). You may also provide a descriptive caption with the photo to offer the reader a synopsis of your post.
All effective writing isn’t necessarily in the headline and body text.
5. Your paragraphs break the four-line rule
Avoid redundancies and edit paragraphs to four lines or less. Structure your posts for short attention spans.
6. Your headlines break the goldilocks rule
If Goldilocks was on a search for the best headline (not a perfect bed to sleep in), she’d choose one that is not too short, not too long, but “just right.”
Do you want people to retweet your headlines? Keep them succinct and juicy.
7. Each post does not have a byline
Post bylines give readers information about you if they haven’t first viewed your bio or About page. They introduce you and build trust with a potential new subscriber.
Use the space at the bottom of every post to connect with readers.
Bylines are an excellent opportunity to link to products or services that you offer.
8. You use too many incomplete sentences
Incomplete sentences, abrupt tangents, and parenthetical thoughts can be disruptive. Use them sparingly.
9. Your posts include obvious factual blunders
Make sure that your links correspond to the proper, active URLs. Check the spellings of names/titles. Is “Wednesday, March 9” really a “Wednesday?”
Inaccuracies in simple elements of your posts are only a result of laziness.
10. You make “actual word” typos
Many pubic relations firms (oops, I mean, “public” relations firms) are familiar with this type of error. Spell check won’t alert you when you type an incorrect word that is spelled correctly.
There’s no prize for proofreading fast. Examine your text so that each word is the word that you intend to write.
The occasional “actual word” typo even appears on ProBlogger. (In the fourth paragraph of the ProBlogger guest post, the word “A” should be “At.”)
11. You use incorrect or excessive punctuation
You can express your voice and tone without distracting eyesores, such as “?!?!”, every time that you’re flabbergasted. Simply end sentences with periods, instead of transitioning with ellipses.
Learn the specific functions of each type of dash: hyphens, en-dashes, and em-dashes. If you’re not sure how to use a certain punctuation mark, look it up.
12. Your blog has inconsistencies
It’s easier to spot inconsistencies when you follow the four-line rule for paragraphs. Be careful with:
- Name references. If you mention the name “Darren Rowse,” refer to him as “Darren” or “Rowse” in the remainder of the text. Don’t alternate between the two.
- Hyphenated words. If you use the word “copy-editor,” don’t write it elsewhere in your post as “copy editor” or “copyeditor.”
- Spelling. If you write the name “Stefanie,” don’t also spell it “Stephanie” when you refer to the same individual again.
- Numbered items. If you promise “Five Tips” in your headline, list five distinct tips in your post.
- Paragraph breaks. Make sure that paragraphs don’t accidently run together after your publish.
13. You use vague words
Edit words from your first draft until they are refined and specific. Each sentence should be crisp and clear.
14. You confuse plurals and possessives
I’ve even written “letter’s” in first draft copy when I intended to write “letters.” Pay attention to apostrophes and plural words when proofreading to double-check that they are used correctly.
15. You include too many links in posts
Limit links to relevant, useful articles that supplement your writing. Set links to open in new browser tabs or windows, so that readers don’t navigate away from your post.
16. You misuse double and single quotation marks
Use single quotation marks for quotes within double quotation marks.
17. You smother direct quotes
Give direct quotes space, rather than cluttering them within a paragraph. Use block quotes to highlight important information or quotes that you analyze.
18. You make word choice errors
Do you know the difference between the words “compliment” and “complement?” “Premier” and “premiere?” “Stationary” and “stationery?”
Unlike “actual word” typos, you may be unaware that you continually make these writing mistakes. Regardless of your niche, if you don’t use the proper words, you’re going to look like an amateur writer.
19. You use too many bold, italicized, and upper-case letters
They’re unattractive, at best, and look like spam, at worst (similar to excessive punctuation).
20. Your blog’s font is too small, big, or fancy
When I get too aesthetically ambitious, I remind myself of the KISS principle: Keep It Simple, Stupid.
I’m launching a new blog soon and recently had fun browsing Genesis Framework themes for WordPress. (No affiliate link here. Just good stuff!)
There’s a style for every taste, yet all design aspects are simple and straightforward—which ultimately enhance your writing.
21. You publish first-draft copy
A sloppy rant may have been appropriate on your LiveJournal in 2003, but first-draft copy does not always communicate your message effectively.
All blog content is an opportunity to demonstrate your superb writing ability. Perform every step of the writing process: writing, editing, proofreading, and more proofreading. Treat your blog like a professional publication, not a hobby.
How do you keep your blog and your reputation spotless? Share your techniques with me in the comments below.
Stefanie Flaxman is an online proofreader who corrects business, marketing, and educational documents in 24 hours. Check out Stefanie’s free report, Business Proofreading Tips Other Proofreaders Don’t Want You to Know, and connect with her on Twitter.
I’m never sure if to link to open in a new tab or not – lots of conflicting advice. Darren Rowse generally doesn’t link to a new tab. What’s the consensus of opinion?
I have spent a lot of time recently improving my writing and it has really paid off with my blog..
I am seeing a much better reaction to my content from my readers!
David,
I would be interested to hear any specifics as what you have done to improving your writing to pay off on your blog.
Isn’t it great when hard work pays off, David? You have a much better chance of communicating your message effectively when your writing is clear and straightforward.
Great post and I agree with every point except for #15 with opening know in new tabs or windows.
I really loathe websites which use this technique because before long I’ve got multiple windows or new tabs open and my online reading experience is severly messy and hampered. Most people soon learn how easy it is to follow a link and then press the back button to get back to where they were OR have the option to open up a new tab or window if they want to.
I think this is preferable but it’s probably a bit like pop-ups which many people have either a love or hate relationship with as well.
Perhaps other readers will disagree with me on this point. Interesting to see.
Good stuff. This resembles my pet peeve list.
Great tips Stefanie. Thank you for sharing your expertise.
Just on time, I’m about to start my new blog after 6 months training on my gaming blog. Thanks for this!
Good luck with the new blog, Jack! I’m sure you learned a lot from your gaming blog over the last six months. “Training” is a great way to phrase it!
I think we’re all guilty of this at one point or another. My blog is all video based however I have the videos transcribed and be sure to include a textual intro as well.
Good points but where do you leave personal writing styles? I believe every blogger should have the unique style. That is what will make them different from others.
Or what do you think Stefanie?
Thanks for sharing, Adesoji!
A unique voice and tone can definitely co-exist with clear, effective writing. In fact, most clear, effective writing does demonstrate the writer’s personality in some way.
It’s important for readers to understand your message, though, so if your “personal writing style” does not engage readers (or is filled with mistakes), it’s difficult to build a following.
Great tips, thanks Stefanie! Just one thing: Wasn’t number 15 (opening links in new windows) completely prohibited? I used to do this at first as well, but several posts on here as well as on Daily Blog Tips convinced me it’s better not to do this.
Hi Maaike,
I never heard that opening links in new windows was prohibited. Why would that be? I look forward to your response.
Thank you,
David
Because opening in a new window is not what visitors will expect. If they want a link to open in a new tab or window, they will open it that way themselves. Also, it breaks the back button.
Read for example:
https://problogger.com/should-links-open-in-a-new-window/
http://www.dailyblogtips.com/do-not-open-new-browser-windows/
http://articles.sitepoint.com/article/beware-opening-links-new-window
Thank you for your respone Maaike,
David
Opps! spelling…
Thank you for your response Maaike,
David
Thanks for bringing this up, Maaike! Very interesting question.
I offer this advice from a “no distractions” mindset. If I’m reading a blog post with a really good looking link, I like to have it open elsewhere (I personally prefer another browser Tab), so that I can get to it when I’m finished reading. That way, I don’t forget about the link, but it doesn’t distract me from the original post.
I realize I could be going against the grain here, since many top blog have links open within the same frame. Ultimately, you know what’s best for your blog/readers and perhaps links within the same frame are more appropriate.
Let’s hope others weigh in to see what they think is best!
One of the best articles I’ve ever read on proof-reading! 21 valuable takeaways for me.
The best tip was four-line rule, I’ll take care of this in my writing.
I am very weak in writing and thinking about the topic. Your post help me to write better quality contents. Great post i like this post.
Small improvements contribute to better content over time. Thanks for reading!
I totally agree that many of the steps that you list are extremely important to the success of your blog. My biggest issue, that I find, is I am spending too much time on getting everything (font, grammar, layout, etc) perfect instead of making exceptional content. If I find myself spending an extra 30-60 minutes proofreading and editing, chances are my post will never get written or published.
I would love to be a full time writer and spend my entire day editing my creative content but like many others, I have a full time job and other life activities that only allow me to blog as time permits. It might take me an hour or two to write a small, meaningful 500 word post and spending the extra time editing it is just not feasible to me.
I think everyone should work at and strive to do all of the things that you mentioned but sometimes, at least for me, my content is much more important than how it looks or reads as long as I get my message gets across to the reader before the information becomes stale.
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I help my articles achieve good quality by writing at least three drafts. I also try my best to get the important elements working correctly; a catchy title, an intro that entices, a text body that delivers and a conclusion that wraps up the topic. I also read a good variety of websites about writing. There’s always more to learn. Thanks for the post, Stefanie.
The main point about this post seems to be that you should take a lot of care to ensure that your readers are getting quality. You need to know your posts are written not only well but correctly before they go live otherwise your readers aren’t getting the quality that they deserve.
Well put, John. It’s all about quality. How can a reader engage with your content (and spread the word about how awesome you are), if she can’t understand what you’re saying? Writing is a process and you shouldn’t cut corners—continually show off your best work.
” Treat your blog like a professional publication, not a hobby.” Thank you!!!
You’re welcome, Cathy!
I’m also planning big review of my writing, especially because I’m not native English speaker – next week will be a huge pause in writing, and I will focus on recalling some grammar tips from the school :)
Your blog will definitely see positive results when you improve the clarity of your writing. It sounds like you’re on the right track, Nathan! I admire your focus—English is not an easy second language!
Very useful information!
Makes you think.
Had to change something in my blog after reading this post.
I love the feeling that you get when you make a change to your blog/Web site and it looks so much better! It sparks inspiration to make more improvements as time goes on.
I have a problem with using too many parenthesis. Recently I visited another blog that also was heavy on the parenthetical statements, and I saw how distracting it was to my reading experience. Now I make a point to try and make my statements work within the regular sentence more often.
Reading really great authors, as well as not so great ones, has always been a big help to my writing skills.
I think another reputation crushing mistake might be using “lol” in every paragraph. At least, that ruins it for me. Thanks for the great tips!
I like the concept of reading “not so great” writing. Reading as much great writing as possible is a tip that I often recommend as well, but you can also learn what not to do from poor writing.
Excellent set of tips! I know I get really frustrated when I visit a blog and I find misspelled words all over…next site, please!
Thank you for this article. I really appreciated the content. I’m new at this and have not received feedback about my writing as much as the content. I’m passionate about the subject and look forward to making money from my blog in the future. Perhaps you might be interested in a critique?
I offer proofreading services and editorial consulting. Feel free to check out my Web site and let me know if you have any questions! Thanks!
Umm, you realize there are no images in your guest post, right?
You are correct, Perry! But this isn’t my blog. I’m a guest here, and I trust the ProBlogger team to make executive decisions about images and final edits. :-)
OK, I’ll admit that I’m guilty of a few of these. But I try to hold fast to some of the important ones that show care with writing. Nothing is more annoying than typos, grammatical and punctuation mistakes. No one is perfect, but looking like you’re at least trying is important. Thank you for this great post!
You’re welcome, Vicki! You definitely don’t want to make yourself crazy attempting to be perfect. There’s always room for improvement.
I like the good, old-fashioned “do your best” advice. Perfection can be a goal, even if it’s never achieved.
I’ve been writing and blogging for a long time, and I picked up some great new information and great reminders from your post. Your list is extremely exhaustive, value-add and compelling! Thank you!
Any idea how to overcome all these mistakes? I have so many ideas about writing, but I am not native. I made some common mistakes in writing even I joined several English classes.
I’d focus on one aspect of your writing at a time, Ahmad. Trying to improve everything at once is overwhelming.
Here are two tips to get started:
1. Study excellent writing as much as possible. (You’re already reading ProBlogger, so that’s a good sign.) :-)
2. When it comes to your own writing, examine each sentence individually. It may seem like a tedious task, but you don’t want to take any aspect of your writing for granted. Highlight words or phrases that you think may be incorrect. If you know a native English speaker, see if he/she can help you correct your mistakes—then learn from them, so that you don’t repeat the errors in the future. You’ll see your writing get better.
Thanks Stefanie! got some motivation to move on a right track :)
That’s what I like to hear! :-) Good luck, Ahmad!
I have to add up more of these to my lists of things to keep in mind when writing. Fairly, this excites me to create another blog and see the improvement. :)
I’m all about excitement! Keep the creative juices flowing! :-)
Looking forward to implementing these. Thank you.
I am happy to say that I do not make any of these mistakes. I seem to be a snob when it comes to my writing (unless I can’t help it (time wise)).
Sometimes it’s difficult to review our own writing critically. Other times, we’re our worse critics! Happy to hear that you’re confident about your blog content!
even if most of above mistakes exist but you are having a blog with real original content then it will get good traffic.
I need to go back to writing school, I have found this article very helpful though.
Awesome post! Lots of great ideas to consider and use here. I like point 4 about including images and using the image title and ALT tag to include your keyword(s).
Using this technique I have been succesfull in attracting traffic from, say, Google Image search.
Isn’t that a fun trick? Images not only enhance your post visually, but they can also help people find your blog. Glad it’s working for you, Simon!
Ack, I’m guilty of too long paragraphs…they could be 8 lines long. Boring! Thanks for these great tips!
Penelope
You’re welcome, Penelope! Always keep the reader in mind. If you’d get bored reading an 8-line paragraph, don’t subject your readers to such long text. Break it down for them!
Best post I’ve seen in a while. Should be read by every new blogger.
Thanks for the compliment, Michael! :-) Glad you enjoyed!
Stefanie, great stuff. Recently I started a blogging grammar series on one of my blogs. My own errors notwithstanding, some kinds of errors really get under my skin.
My favorite tip is probably to have a byline. I get irritated when I can’t get a feel for the piece because I don’t know the author. Knowing the biases and view of the author helps with interpretation. Even if I do NOT konw the author, it tells me not to make assumptions I might otherwise.
For example, if I come here and read a guest post, it might feel off if I have assumed it’s Darren, but doesn’t SOUND like him.
One thing I’d add: show the post date. I realize some bloggers don’t like to because it makes older posts seem dated, but, frankly, that’s the point. I WANT to know how old information is. If this is hidden from me, I don’t trust it as much because I can’t gauge its relevance. The date also puts a historical/situational context on posts that help in understanding.
I agree about dates especially if it is a repost as if you are posting about an event you attended, you want people to see when it happened.
Stefanie
This is one worth printing out.
It should be compulsory reading for any new or seasoned blogger.
“The art of effective blogging strikes a balance between traditional journalism concepts and the casual, interactive tone that is characteristic of new media.”
That’s a great summary of blogging style.
It’s great when the comments become as interesting as the initial post and commenters start to interact.
I try to encourage that sort of interaction but it’s not always easy.
I’ll check out your blog.
“Make sure that paragraphs don’t accidently run together after your publish.” Hmmm, that’s two!
Sorry, Stefanie, couldn’t resist it…
But I certainly agree with your sentiments!
great article and ideas…my blog is growing well but still needs to get over the 200 followers hump. I find I get a lot of new visitors but all do not follow…I do have more subscribers than followers…over 200 there. will try to work on some of your ideas mentioned above. Thanx again!!
This is just what I needed! Thanks.
Thank goodness over a period of time I’ve eliminated most of these mistakes. I just have to keep at it to get rid of the rest. Thank you.
Attempting to be grammatically correct is difficult and may stop someone from writing something of value in a blog. Perfection is not necessary for many messages and can become a road block, especially for many people who are just starting out.
I know of several top bloggers who make these mistakes on a daily basis and it does not hinder their efforts. They are focused on delivering their message, errors included.
Does your audience expect perfection in your writing, or do they look to you to be like them?
Point out errors in my writing and I’m quick to correct it, but I’m not letting unknown errors from keeping me moving forward.
Don’t get my tone wrong, I think you have given great advice, and food for thought. I just think you need to include a disclaimer stating “Don’t let unknown errors hold you back from moving forward.”
This post is superbly written, so it was a real pleasure to read. The fact that it contains so much useful information makes it really special!
Bloggers tend to be excellent communicators, I think, but many don’t realize that written communication requires a higher knowledge of grammar than does spoken communication. My background is in English grammar education and editing, so I write a post each Thursday called “English teacher” wherein I try to help people learn some of those grammatical rules and word choices necessary for written communication. I’ve learned that many people really don’t know the difference between “complement” and “compliment,” “stationary” and “stationery.” I try to explain things thoroughly but kindly. And I make my email address available for anyone who has specific grammatical questions. It’s real fun for me to help people learn to use the language well.
This is my second comment–I just realized that I typed “It’s real fun for me” in the last sentence of my comment instead of “It’s really fun. . . .” Which goes to show that anyone can make an occasional mistake. Thank goodness bloggers can edit their own posts; I wish I could edit that comment! :)
You say a lot of good things here–but #15 may not be completely accurate. When you recommend that bloggers “set links to open in new browser tabs or windows, so that readers don’t navigate away from your post” — well, this made logical sense to me, when I was about to start blogging. But upon researching the subject, I found that the best common practice is to have your links open in the same browser page. The logic was that it gets too confusing for the reader to have to deal with too many opened pages. And since we bloggers must serve our customers before all else, we should follow the accepted best common practice.
As for the point you make about incorrect punctuation–unless you’re an educational, science, or technically-based blogger, I think it’s more important to focus your blogs on being clear–and conversational.
To be honest i never paid attention to the photos of my posts, initially i had no photos but it seems that they add a lot of value to the readers. It is hard to the average user to read just text online. Pictures make the user understand what are you going to talk about and most importanly keep in his mind what you blogged about by just remembering the picture.
Elias
I disagree with Kirk, but only from a reader’s perspective. It really does have a negative effect on my assessment of a blogger’s value if the posts are consistently riddled with sloppy typos, poor grammar and awkward writing. I do expect excellence (but not perfection) in the blogs I choose to follow. Even if the message is extremely relevant, if it has many of the “reputation-crushing mistakes” that Stefanie wrote about, it’s a fly in an otherwise yummy bowl of soup—and I’m not going anywhere near it.
I think it depends on what kind of content we intend to write and who the audience is. Sometimes, too grammatical sentences don’t delivering the messages effectively but daily languages often do better although there are few incorrect grammars..
Number seven is a great tip. Once the reader reads your blog validate yourself and your content by including information about the author.Thanks
A big point made for me was the one about wiki-like blog posts. I think sometimes I find myself coming across too factual or academic, rather than an individual. Good point.
Stefanie,
Thank you for the 21 great tips! I’m working on Points #5 & 6 and I think I’m guilty of #16. Don’t go making any “house calls”, I need to double check. :)
Thank you again, this one is going to Instapaper,
Theresa
I’d say one of the only good parts about school was learning to write correctly. Even though, once in a while, I love breaking those rules and just goin’ crazy. And I wonder sometimes when wanna will become an accepted word.
Thanks for these tips.